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[bast2]

Traitor Heart (III)

Escape
Bast
Criminal Intent (this is awkward, and this is too long, but this is definately more)

Comments

[tres_mechante]

[ "Your loyalty is touching, luv."] Ouch.

I also like the last part of the first sentence, the bit about "the revelation, the power". It really hints at so many possibilites.

And then there's the fallout for all this. Hmm...

Nicely done, Bast. My imagination is having fun this scenario. *g*

[bast2]

Thank you!

[mina_kat9]

Creepy. Nice. Just.... Look, you are making our Daddy's little girl stuff look tame. Seriously. Quit.

[bast2]

Ummm...I'm glad you're reading, but I don't understand your comment. You want me to quit? Seriously?

[mina_kat9]

No!! Of course not. Picture me sitting at my table, suddenly shivering and telling the guy in the horror movie not to go through that door. He's gotta go, we all know it....

Same feeling. Delightful creepiness. Don't stop. Please.

[daf9]

"Your loyalty is touching, luv." Eames couldn't miss the hidden irony.

Delicious!

[bast2]

Glad you liked it!

[stunt_muppet]

Ohmygoodness. :D This just keeps getting better. I'm glad to hear there's more.

[bast2]

Thanks, and I hope you keep reading!

[animaltalker]

God, I'm now imaging a scene in which Bobby takes out his feelings of anger and betrayal on Alex in a very hot sex scene (doesn't help that I finally got to see Fires Within tonight)

[bast2]

Don't know what Fires Within is, but thanks for reading, and who knows what sort of scenes are ahead..