Drabble: And Yet Again Worse

Sep 28, 2009 02:42

“I’m clocking out.”  Astoria slammed her clipboard down on the counter at the mediwitch station, jarring the stacks of case files and rattling a coffee mug perched precariously close to the edge.  A pile of Quibblers that someone insisted on dropping off “for the patients” every month (despite the strong and repeated protests of the hospital staff ( Read more... )

drabble, hp, fanfic, draco/astoria, angst, het, canon fest

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lauryne78 September 28 2009, 15:02:59 UTC
Thank you so much!! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it...I just couldn't leave the first one without some resolution. And I thought folks would enjoy sneaky!Draco...Astoria's certainly not beyond a little naughtiness (or perhaps a lot).

I'd be thrilled to post links to them...will do!!

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tania_sings September 28 2009, 08:33:39 UTC
Yay! It's like the start of a series! This is just as good as the first one.

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lauryne78 September 28 2009, 15:04:04 UTC
Heh. I know what you're getting at...but I've got far too much in my writing/betaing queue to consider it right now!! Who knows though, perhaps sometime down the road this will turn in to something more....for now though, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!!

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rose_starr September 29 2009, 01:37:16 UTC
Oh!! What a perfect follow up to the first one!! I really feel her conflict and also feel for her!

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lauryne78 September 29 2009, 03:43:08 UTC
Thank you, my dear!! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. I like writing Astoria's pov, and it had been far too long...this was a nice little breath of fresh air to write, even if it was angsty to read!!

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rose_starr September 29 2009, 03:47:31 UTC
Well, since I am a fan of angsty ... :)

Do more!

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lauryne78 September 29 2009, 04:02:09 UTC
Heh. :) You and tania_sings are both prodding me for more! I'd *like* to at some point...but I'm not sure when I can. Canon_fest is kind of consuming me right now (esp b'c I'm having a tricky time with it), and poor George and Luna are starting to wonder if I'll ever get back to *them*!! But I never say never...so who knows what the future may hold!!

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heart_eyes23 August 23 2010, 00:34:17 UTC
I really like this look into Astoria. I'm curious about what it was with McLaggen. Very good, concise writing!!

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