Comments | laurie_ky: "If You Judge, Investigate" A standalone story in the 'Fair Distance' universe

laurie_ky

"If You Judge, Investigate" A standalone story in the 'Fair Distance' universe

Apr 06, 2008 15:41

Sentinel Thursday Challenge 211 and 215 First Things First/OMC
A stand-alone story for the ‘Fair Distance’ universe.
Author: Laurie
Title: “If You Judge, Investigate”
Type: Gen
Rating: Gen
Warning: suspicion of child abuse
Beta'ed by t_verano. Thank you, once again, for all your help ( Read more... )

gen, sentinel thursday, a fair distance, standalone stories from a fair distance, the sentinel

Comments 40

karieflybabe April 6 2008, 21:12:02 UTC

MORE!!!!!!

laurie_ky April 6 2008, 21:32:12 UTC

Okay!
and I hope you had a good birthday.
Laurie

banbury April 6 2008, 21:23:34 UTC

Wonderful! I love Blair both young and adult, such a nice person!

laurie_ky April 6 2008, 21:33:07 UTC

He really would have been a cutie.
Laurie

banbury April 6 2008, 23:28:41 UTC

Sorry, one word in my comment slipped away - I meant your Blair :-) Not everybody's Blair is really nice person and you right - he would have been a cutie :-)

laurie_ky April 7 2008, 05:37:44 UTC

I agree.
Laurie

ladytygereyez April 6 2008, 22:18:24 UTC

Oh wow, this was great! I'd love to see what happens next. Powerful stuff indeed.

laurie_ky April 7 2008, 05:37:07 UTC

Neat icon you have there.
I'm glad you enjoyed this story. More on what happened is told in Ball and Chain, which I'm working on now. Powerful is correct, so powerful that Blair's choices are being influenced by what went on during this time of his life.
Thanks for reading and commenting,
Laurie

roslynsmuse April 6 2008, 22:33:40 UTC

Very believable scenario of the microscope theft story. Looking forward to more flashbacks in this series.

laurie_ky April 7 2008, 05:33:31 UTC

I'm glad you found the reason Blair stole the microscope believable. I always thought there was more to the story than Blair explained in the show.
Thanks for reading and commenting,
Laurie

t_verano April 6 2008, 23:07:32 UTC

I love the new details. Blair just tugs at my heart in that opening scene, alone and scared and rubbing his hands nervously on his jeans. And Boles makes my skin crawl on Blair's behalf.

You've built such a real and involved and moving world. Like I said, I'm not going to want you to stop even when you get through with the third arc. :-)

(And thanks for the answer to my question; I was fascinated, and I love you spelling it all out for me. And sheesh -- you could continue to add tons of stories based even on that chunk of time and thought. I'll answer that email better a little later on...)

laurie_ky April 7 2008, 05:30:24 UTC

Blair... ::agrees ( ... )