A Fair Distance:Running on Empty. Chapter Four

Aug 09, 2007 00:22

Challenge 117 Memories
Title: A Fair Distance Part Four
Author: Laurie
Type: Slash
Rating: Pg-17
Beta’ed by t_verano. Much, Much thanks for the fine eye and careful brain. Picture by slipperieslopeDisclaimer: These guys are not mine. This story is transformative in nature. Permission to archive given ( Read more... )

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slipperieslope August 9 2007, 20:46:37 UTC
Squeeeeeeeeee! More!!

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laurie_ky August 10 2007, 00:58:15 UTC
Okay, there will be more, probably a lot more because of the way things are enfolding.
Laurie

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lit_gal August 9 2007, 23:32:14 UTC
Oh, how heartbreaking. The boys stopped talking, and Blair felt like the fifth wheel. Oh god. And circumstantial evidence against Blair when we know Blair was out of town... oh, someone is holding a grudge.

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laurie_ky August 10 2007, 01:09:22 UTC
There has been a serious lack of communicating and way too much of making assumptions about each other. And Blair has become a fifth wheel,which was one of the things I wanted to bring out about how things change when the group dynamics are shifted. People fall out of sync with each other and it's different then between them. But usually they make new connections and Blair is being prevented from doing so. He's drifting right now. Starting a sexual relationship with Jim was in his head the way to becoming more anchored to Jim but when it blew up he had nothing really left anymore.
Thanks for reading and commenting,
Laurie

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sparrowhawk17 August 10 2007, 23:30:42 UTC
Woo Hoo! an update. You have an excellent grasp on Simon. I love it.

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laurie_ky August 11 2007, 01:20:33 UTC
Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad that Simon came across as himself to you.
Laurie

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suemc August 13 2007, 17:04:46 UTC
I am getting really hooked on this story. Poor Jim and Blair, communication has totally broken down.

Write more soon, please

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laurie_ky August 14 2007, 11:43:25 UTC
Nice icon. Yes, they both stopped trying to really talk to each other and were going on assumptions instead.
Thanks for reading and commenting,
Laurie

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