Hierarchy of Desires 4 & 5

[laurie_bunter]

I found these vignettes sitting around my laptop, languishing in the limbo known as my story folder. Perhaps its time to post them? Although not a lot of people seem interested... oh well. Some pet projects will never be popular. Keep on truckin', I guess.

title: Hagu and the Male Gaze and The Illusion of Hunger
vignettes 4 &5 of Hierarchy of

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[shalomdebbie]

Those were beautiful.

And with this line I finally understood a pairing I disliked:

And that’s why she loved Shu-chan best. He just didn’t look. He listened. And he made all things possible.

[laurie_bunter]

Oh, thanks. *hugs*

You're the first person to comment on these vignettes, EVER, and so I feel much better. No matter how often I tried to convince myself that "no feedback is good feedback" I still felt... weird.

*more hugs*

I don't know how I feel, exactly, towards the Hagu-Hanamoto pairing. On one level it's almost incest. On another level it is the only one that makes sense. I blame Chica Umino, really, for being vague about they are related.

[shalomdebbie]

I'm so terrible about not leaving comments, so sorry. But I read everything all the time and these last two were just too gorgeously written not to just say "beautiful" if that's all I said.