You can totally poke me for saying so... but I haven't started reading (not really) Blood/Water. I'm not into the mystery/suspense genre at the mo, so I hope that you can see where I'm coming from. *cringes* Even Lord Peter -an arm's length away- is half-read.
Hahahaha. It's okay, dearie. It's hard to read something when you're not in the mood for it. I just happen to be a mystery/suspense dork since childhood!
Some people feel that Lord Peter is too British and too snobby a character to appeal to everyone. *shrugs*
Here, have a chocolate, along with my cosmic-twin pokes. *throws chocolate to you*
Thanks. *sigh of relief* I had a difficult time writing that graveyard scene. :D
Oh man. A sequel. I know I originally planned it to have a sequel but I am drained right now. *laughs ruefully* Maybe in a couple of months you can prod me with a stick for it.
Thanks. :D I was worried about the mushy bits, and the slightly OOC bits too.
Yes, Byakuya's tears are cringe-worthy but if you've ever seen a strong man cry, that's how it's going to be. I've always wondered, at the end of SS arc, if Kubo intentionally drew it so some of Byakuya's sweat drops looked like tears. Of course, this Byakuya-fangirl is overanalyzing again... <3
Thank you for finally finding it in yourself to finish this. I really enjoyed the story and was excited to see the conclusion posted.
I always feel a bit weird commenting with corrections, but you did ask. "I don’t know if he’s going to be charge with anything." - Should be charged "The old defense team was sacked perhaps unnecessary at this point, but the general public didn’t know that." - The wording is a bit awkward. Did you mean unnecessarily? I feel like there was one more thing that caught my eye as I was reading, but I can't find it again...
Thanks for reading it, too. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
Also thanks for the corrections! Yey. I'm really happy when someone spots a goof and tells me about it. Every story needs a second pair of eyes to see the typos, so don't worry about it <3
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Margh.
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Some people feel that Lord Peter is too British and too snobby a character to appeal to everyone. *shrugs*
Here, have a chocolate, along with my cosmic-twin pokes. *throws chocolate to you*
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I'll be nice and wait a while before I demand a sequel.
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Oh man. A sequel. I know I originally planned it to have a sequel but I am drained right now. *laughs ruefully* Maybe in a couple of months you can prod me with a stick for it.
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Yes, Byakuya's tears are cringe-worthy but if you've ever seen a strong man cry, that's how it's going to be. I've always wondered, at the end of SS arc, if Kubo intentionally drew it so some of Byakuya's sweat drops looked like tears. Of course, this Byakuya-fangirl is overanalyzing again... <3
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What Rukia thought when she saw Byakuya crying:
Oh noes why are you still more beautiful than me when you have snot running all over your face? Oh God the world is so unfair...
Sorry. Crack. LALALALA <3
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I always feel a bit weird commenting with corrections, but you did ask.
"I don’t know if he’s going to be charge with anything." - Should be charged
"The old defense team was sacked perhaps unnecessary at this point, but the general public didn’t know that." - The wording is a bit awkward. Did you mean unnecessarily?
I feel like there was one more thing that caught my eye as I was reading, but I can't find it again...
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Also thanks for the corrections! Yey. I'm really happy when someone spots a goof and tells me about it. Every story needs a second pair of eyes to see the typos, so don't worry about it <3
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