[fic] Falling Into Place

Jun 08, 2009 22:32

Title: Falling Into Place
Characters: Kakashi, Kushina, Madara, Naruto, Rin, Sakura
Pairings: vaguely MadaKush
Genre: Angst
Rating: T
A/N: For okroginator who came up with the pairing in the first place. Plot inspired by whoever made the comments on chuunin about Kushina being Madara's weapon.
Summary: Unfortunately for Naruto, Madara knows exactly how to pick his ( Read more... )

uzumaki naruto, uzumaki kushina, madara/kushina, uchiha madara, hatake kakashi, !complete, fanfiction, rin, haruno sakura, naruto

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okroginator June 12 2009, 15:02:39 UTC
*flails* Ooohh, this was beautifully creepy and filled with the kind of mind-frackery that Madara is sooooo good at, sksljdfsklfs~~

*thumbs-up*

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laurelsblue June 12 2009, 15:27:14 UTC
I'm glad you like it. I wasn't sure if the whole mind-screwing thing came across particularly well but you seem to got it which is good.
Originally I was planning to end it by having Kushina saying her name but she made it very clear that she hates cliffhangers.
The genjutsu part was put in to avoid writing an actual fight scene. I think it works a lot better this way fortunately.

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malinear June 13 2009, 16:41:38 UTC
Ohmygod

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laurelsblue June 13 2009, 16:54:24 UTC
Hopefully that was meant in a good way... :;

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malinear June 13 2009, 19:47:45 UTC
Yes...I just couldn't figure out any other way to put it. ^.^

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laurelsblue June 13 2009, 19:57:07 UTC
I'm glad you liked it then. :)

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