Torchwood/Dr Who - fic - The Torchwood Girls, Part 16, Nine/Rose/Jack/TARDIS, PG-13/12

[laurab1]

Fandoms - Torchwood/Dr Who/Pat Barker’s Regeneration
Title - The Torchwood Girls, Part 16/20?
Author - laurab1Characters/pairings - Jack, Dr W H R Rivers, Nine/Rose/Jack/TARDIS

Comments

[kensieg]

yay! another tw girls post! very good but too short!

[laurab1]

Thank you :)

[msp_hacker]

I definately like the tweakings from the draft you posted earlier. Though my favorite bit has to the "pages" of Scientific Romances: Kaj Eofors Elba. Any mention of Jack's first language, especially actual words, turns me into goo.

[laurab1]

Thank you :)

Um, I have to admit, the extra words on the title page are actually that made up language, Esperanto. I did alter the grammar to Latin languages, though.

[msp_hacker]

It still counts, even if all the modifications were just grammatical ones, because that does change the language a whole lot. Especially since most people forget that Modern UK English is not Jack's first language.

[secbeth]

I love this Doctor listen to his stories!! I would be rolling my eyes!!

[laurab1]

Yes ;) We never quite know if Jack's telling the truth, do we? XD Thank you :)

[vipersweb]

very lovely as always. Nice to see how Jack views his time with the Doctor and Rose and with TW.

[laurab1]

Thank you :)

[donutsweeper]

Rivers is being surprisingly open minded about it all!

[laurab1]

Thank you :) Dr Rivers was actually friends with HG Wells; I'm using that as his basis for not freaking out ;)