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[laura_lee]

Why do you want to go to St. Johns and evaluate the strengths and weaknesses of your formal education to date

When people ask me where I want to go to college, I always reflect for a moment before I answer. The truth of course is that I’ve wanted to go to St. Johns since I discovered it existed. I don’t like to say that too quickly though because

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[w_wellington]

just read the first one, but plurals don't need apostrophes (tuition's = tuitions).

[laura_lee]

I refuse to admit that I'm that mentally slow...but thanks for the tip.

[vornskr]

didn't read very much, but I think it's rote and not route memorization.

w00t for Mr Olstad, though.

[vornskr]

oh, continuity (or something) point:

one paragraph, you talk about your physics teacher making a distinction btw schooling and education, then the next you talk about being schooled in physics class

[laura_lee]

Thank you so much for catching that. I'm terrible at proofing and figured, hey, I've got smart friends.