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laughtersmelody

Fic: Ever After

Jun 26, 2013 05:00

Title: Ever After ( Read more... )

genre: family, rating: g, genre: romance, pairing: max/alec, fanfiction: dark angel, character: alec/494, character: original character, type: one-shot, genre: humor, character: max/452

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laughtersmelody June 27 2013, 04:53:25 UTC

Thank you so much! :D I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, and that it made you grin! It's definitely not the most angsty Dark Angel fic I've ever written, lol. ;)

sophie_deangirl June 29 2013, 18:51:16 UTC

What a lovely blast from the past and it's not difficult to imagine that Alec's and Max's future would be just delightfully "normal" this way!! I really loved remembering them again

Fave part:

"MARRY ME" was scrawled across the surface of the Space Needle in fresh, white spray-paint.

-- too adorable!!

Her son was handsome - she knew that. With Manticore genetics, it was pretty much guaranteed.

That was why, when a pretty teenage girl smiled at Alex, Max didn't think much about it.

It wasn't until Alec's ladies-man smirk spread across their fourteen-year-old son's features that Max realized they were in trouble.

-Tee hee!!!!

Right now, she had a husband to kill. Slowly.

-- I can so see Max's expression here and it makes me laugh.

"Ow!" he complained. "I have a permanent bruise there, you know. What did I do this time?"

Max rolled her eyes. "Like you even have to ask."

--this was HILARIOUS and just too cute!!

laughtersmelody June 30 2013, 04:02:15 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! I was hoping you would read this one. :D It's certainly not the most serious Dark Angel fic I've written, lol, but it was a lot of fun to work on. *grins*