Still good. Kind of running out of things to say now unless I want to repeat myself.
Seems my previous guesses were way off, but it's interesting to see how people's minds can go in different directions with the information presented. I still wonder whatever happened with the Perfect and her husband. Will she/they be back in some capacity later? Was that all a red herring, or will it be a part of the plot again?
The thing with the digestive enzyme was creative. Can't remember having read it being used this way before. Loved the interaction when Rodney asked John questions to distract him from the pain.
Curious as to how many chapters there are left.
I see you insist on claiming both John and Rodney as yours now. Well, keep dreaming, like thousands of other fans ( including me in the case of Rodney ) do! ;)
Thank you so much! No worries about repeating yourself, lol. I so appreciate your comments and I look forward to getting them!
It is amazing how different people pick up different details. Perfect Varrin and the Itharians are part of the plot again in the future, though admittedly, I don't describe what happened to Inara's husband in the fic. I do have Inara's back-story in my mind though, which I'm happy to share, if you'd like me to. :)
I'm glad you liked the digestive enzyme! Cruel as it sounds, lol, I've had that idea for a while whump-wise, and this seemed like the perfect opportunity to use it, lol. And I just couldn't resist the chance to have Rodney and Sheppard talk a little more.
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Seems my previous guesses were way off, but it's interesting to see how people's minds can go in different directions with the information presented. I still wonder whatever happened with the Perfect and her husband. Will she/they be back in some capacity later? Was that all a red herring, or will it be a part of the plot again?
The thing with the digestive enzyme was creative. Can't remember having read it being used this way before. Loved the interaction when Rodney asked John questions to distract him from the pain.
Curious as to how many chapters there are left.
I see you insist on claiming both John and Rodney as yours now. Well, keep dreaming, like thousands of other fans ( including me in the case of Rodney ) do! ;)
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It is amazing how different people pick up different details. Perfect Varrin and the Itharians are part of the plot again in the future, though admittedly, I don't describe what happened to Inara's husband in the fic. I do have Inara's back-story in my mind though, which I'm happy to share, if you'd like me to. :)
I'm glad you liked the digestive enzyme! Cruel as it sounds, lol, I've had that idea for a while whump-wise, and this seemed like the perfect opportunity to use it, lol. And I just couldn't resist the chance to have Rodney and Sheppard talk a little more.
There are 10 chapters total. :)
Lol! Well, can you really blame me? ;)
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