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death_of_dreams June 18 2009, 02:00:29 UTC
You should post this at Max_alec so others can join the love fest. Or transgenesis - both are Max/Alec communities.

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death_of_dreams June 18 2009, 02:00:57 UTC
*is a moron who just realized this is at transgenesis already*

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laughtersmelody June 18 2009, 02:18:43 UTC
Lol, don't worry, I appreciate the suggestions!

I post in a bunch of places, other websites and DA/fanfic communities here on LJ, but I don't post at max_alec. I will definitely have to think about it. :)

Thank you for the idea!

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wyntertwilight June 18 2009, 22:04:47 UTC
Hahaha, I love that Max is getting so bothered by Teresa, she actively did something to separate her from Alec. Even if she won't admit the reasons why. It was amusing to see her come up with an excuse for it on the spot!

I also love that he can see something's bothering her, it shows how well he knows her. Even if he's in denial about his feelings aswell. These two, honestly.

Looking forward to more! I'm interested by how the film is going to get done so quickly, but I'm hoping that means we get to see more of the movie-making quicker, which means seeing the M/A soon. I'm eager, lol.

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laughtersmelody June 19 2009, 06:35:19 UTC
Thank you so much!!!

I'm so glad you enjoyed Max's reaction to Teresa, lol. It was a lot of fun to write. Teresa (and Max's jealousy) will play a big part in the future.

Max and Alec are both really good at denying things aren't they, lol?

The next couple chapters will be more about what Malone is actually up to, but I promise, some MA moments are definitely to come, lol! *grin*

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reci_cup June 19 2009, 00:19:27 UTC
I feel big change in Max and Alec's relationship coming. *gigglesnort*

Loved the lines: "Right. Sure. Max was jealous, and Logan was gonna swear-off pasta and pre-pulse wine for life." Priceless.

Ok, ready for next chappie!!!!:D

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laughtersmelody June 19 2009, 05:10:45 UTC
A big change? I have no idea what you mean... *grin*

I'm so glad you like the line about Logan! I have to admit, that one makes me laugh every time I read it, lol.

The next chapter should be up either later -- *looks at clock* -- um, really late tonight, lol, or tomorrow. :)

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sockkiah June 19 2009, 06:21:51 UTC
Oh man, you have got Max down! You write her so well; she is just like she was at the beginning of S2 when she was acting all jealous of Asha and whatever. I can hear that exact tone ringing in my head as I read your words.

And all the M/A banter is cracking me up and making me go "awwww." :D I love it.

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laughtersmelody June 19 2009, 06:48:50 UTC
Thank you so much!!!!

I don't know what else to say besides thank you, lol!

I'm so glad you enjoy the way I write Max. When I first started writing Dark Angel I found her to be a big challenge, because my personality is pretty different from hers, lol, so it means a lot that you think I've captured her well.

And I'm glad you're enjoying the banter too! *grin* There is definitely more of that to come, lol.

The next chapter should be up tomorrow, Lord willing. :)

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e0wyn July 22 2010, 17:26:16 UTC
Great chapter, I especially liked the end... Alec's realization that, unconsciously, he's beginning to think of Max in a different way :)

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laughtersmelody July 23 2010, 07:42:47 UTC
Thank you! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter! I really had fun writing Alec's thoughts. I didn't want it to be an immediate realizaion... Max and Alec are just to stubborn to do things the easy way, lol. ;)

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