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Fic: Instinctive

Aug 31, 2010 17:44

Title: Instinctive
Author: laughter_now
Rating: NC-17, Porn with a shameless mini-excuse for a plot.
Wordcount: 9.035. I kid you not, it's nearly half a Big Bang of porn...I'm shocked at myself.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything, and I'm fairly sure Paramount would not want to claim this here if they knew of its existence.
Summary: Maybe there were a couple of ( Read more... )

fanfic, fic: instinctive, star trek xi, rating: nc-17, slash

Comments 43

GAH! cassiopeia13 August 31 2010, 18:43:30 UTC

AHHHH SO SWEET!

And I love that they were both new to the whole man on man thing. So romantic that way, having to learn together.

*starry eyed*

Re: GAH! laughter_now August 31 2010, 19:14:47 UTC

Thank you so much!
I really like the idea that Jim isn't the man-slut fandom often portrays him to be, the one who's already tried everything at least once. A lot more fun to let him stumble into a situation like this that way.

Also, I totally stole your icon for my personal amusement. It's awesome. :D

Re: GAH! cassiopeia13 August 31 2010, 19:24:07 UTC

Haha. Thanks ryui made it for me cause she's the WIN

openedbook August 31 2010, 19:22:42 UTC

Speaking of soiled sheets... ><

Unf! School was really not the place to read this, bb! Good job!

laughter_now September 1 2010, 09:36:14 UTC

Lol, it might lead to interesting questions in case someone is looking over your shoulder while you read this...
Glad you enjoyed it, thanks so much.

dramapunk August 31 2010, 20:06:48 UTC

JESUS CHRIST....Yeah reading this in the cafe at school. Not the best idea ever. But still Wha-damn this was hot.

Love the non perfect first time. Seriously. hehe.

laughter_now September 1 2010, 09:37:14 UTC

First-time pr0n and public places do not a good combination make, lol.
And honestly, which first time is ever perfect? Even with two people like Jim and Bones. It was just too much fun not to go down that road.
Glad you liked it, thanks!

avictoriangirl August 31 2010, 20:09:20 UTC

I just love the way you write these two and this was no exception. This was sweet and so very hot! *fans self*

laughter_now September 1 2010, 09:37:45 UTC

Thanks so much, that's really a great compliment. Made me blush a little. ;-)

rovardotter August 31 2010, 20:12:30 UTC

Oh, poor boys... they really should communicate before taking actions.
It was great, thank you!! :)

laughter_now September 1 2010, 09:38:57 UTC

Oh, but you know what happens when you leave two men to figure out their issues all on their own. Communication? So not the first option they chose, lol.
Glad you enjoyed it, thanks so much!