Fic: One Little White Lie (10/12)

Feb 06, 2010 21:54

Title: One Little White Lie (10/12)
Author: laughter_now
Rating: strong PG-13 (lots of bad words), tending towards R later
Pairing: Jim/Bones
Disclaimer: I don't own anything related to the Star Trek Franchise. *sigh* Sadly.
Summary: One little white lie never hurt anybody, that's what they say. But apparently they are wrong, because even one small lie ( Read more... )

fanfic, fic: one little white lie, rating: pg-13, star trek xi, kirk/mccoy, slash

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carolina30363 February 6 2010, 21:12:28 UTC
Love, love, love your writing.
I really hope Bones will forgive Jim...can't wait for the next part!
Great job

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laughter_now February 6 2010, 21:51:35 UTC
Thanks so much. I had parts of this chapter written back when i started this story and was eally looking forward to getting to this point. So glad you liked it, thanks so much.

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kmyash February 6 2010, 21:14:13 UTC
As always I love it and now I'm more excited that there is a tangible end in sight. Because as much as I hate to finish a story, I love seeing the end even more.

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laughter_now February 6 2010, 21:52:25 UTC
I understand the feeling. I'm glad when my head will be free for new story ideas, but I'll be sad to see this one go. Two more chapters to look forward to, though, if all plays out as planned.

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disturbinglynic February 6 2010, 21:25:23 UTC
oh wow. wonderful as always. those two *shakes head*

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laughter_now February 6 2010, 21:53:03 UTC
Men. *sigh* What can you do? (other than fix them, of course)
Glad you liked it, thanks.

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noelia_g February 6 2010, 21:28:33 UTC
You know, every once in a while when I read a fic, I come across a line or a paragraph that unwinds something in me, and kind of makes me flush all over, with both sadness and excitement.

And with your fics, I have this feeling all throughout, and it's kind of fantastic. And vexing as hell, because there's another cliffhanger and aaargh, but still, so much love :)

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laughter_now February 6 2010, 21:55:08 UTC
You know, that's one of the most awesome compliments I've ever received, because I know exactly what feeling you're talking about. Thanks so much for that!

And that icon? That's pretty much how I pictured Bones was looking like during the scene at the Observation Deck.

Thanks so much!

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just_jane_doe February 6 2010, 21:36:31 UTC
Maaaan... I swear, this chapter is the most excellent one by far (and they've all been damn good, I must admit.) I loved the way you had Jim's soul bared to the bone - the way he said everything he was feeling. Really excellent stuff - thanks for sharing, can't wait for the next chapters!

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laughter_now February 6 2010, 21:57:57 UTC
Thanks so much!
This chapter was what the whole story was driving towards, and I was so nervous whether it was going to work out or not. Thank you, really, so much, I'm thrilled you enjoyed this.

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