Fic: One Little White Lie (9/12)

Jan 31, 2010 18:59

Title: One Little White Lie (9/?)
Author: laughter_now
Rating: strong PG-13 (lots of bad words), tending towards R later
Pairing: Jim/Bones
Disclaimer: I don't own anything related to the Star Trek Franchise. *sigh* Sadly.
Summary: One little white lie never hurt anybody, that's what they say. But apparently they are wrong, because even one small lie ( Read more... )

fanfic, fic: one little white lie, rating: pg-13, star trek xi, kirk/mccoy, slash

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disturbinglynic January 31 2010, 18:21:48 UTC
nooooo!
you sure do love your cliffhangers. i definitely demand the next one right away :)

but seriously, i love this story. and i definitely was not expecting the mind meld to be what bones wanted to talk about. another excellent chapter.

but i am so going to be on the edge of my seat until the next chapter. oh i have to know what's going to happen.

*runs off in search of some kirk/mccoy porn to keep myself distracted*

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laughter_now January 31 2010, 18:46:13 UTC
Lol, I can give you a hint - Kirk/McCoy porn is definitely not going to happen in the next chapter. ;-)
But I knew I should better start working on the next chapter right after posting this one. Glad you liked it.

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disturbinglynic January 31 2010, 18:51:47 UTC
haha. i found something else to distract me now anyway.
it's called Hypothetically Speaking. sound familiar?

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laughter_now January 31 2010, 19:02:19 UTC
*cough* It might.
You might find your Kirk/McCoy sexing a lot faster with HS, too... ;-) Enjoy.

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ramie_k January 31 2010, 18:25:14 UTC
GAH!! Cliffhangers, NOES!!

I knew it! I knew something like this was going to happen. Oh, boys. This is going to be bad.

But you'll make them better. Right? Right?!

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laughter_now January 31 2010, 18:47:24 UTC
But me likes cliffhangers. Me likes them a lot.
Would it help if I promised that this is the last really bad one for this story?
And yeah, it's going to be bad. But I'll do my best to fix it, I promise.

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sleepygoof8784 January 31 2010, 18:26:46 UTC
Ahhhhh, your killing me! Achem, I mean its a really great chapter and I continue to love the story. Also, you are evil leaving it there. I will be looking forward to the next part. Excellent job!

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laughter_now January 31 2010, 18:48:02 UTC
Thanks. I'll be working hard on the next part so that I don't leave you hanging for too long. I couldn't stand to be considered evil, lol.

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firstlaw January 31 2010, 18:39:44 UTC
What an ending!!!!! you the evilest of evil woman! This hurt! (in the good sense ;-))

Until here: Here he was, defending a marriage that didn't even exist. you had me chuckling as if I were reading something funny, because, well, how much ridiculous can Jim become? A white lie, indeed! By this time it's the size of the Empire State and pitch black with black polka dots on it!

But boy, this last part really let me so sad. I can feel the world crashing on Jim's tired shoulders, and cannot even begin to think how confused Bones may be. OK, so let's wait!

Wonderful, YOU manage characters and such an awkward personal situation greatly!

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laughter_now January 31 2010, 18:51:15 UTC
Wow, thanks! It's actually fun to try and keep it light in between so that the whole story doesn't become one sad, depressing tale. And while I love fixing Jim and Bones up all lovingly, sadly that means I have to break them a little first. But I promise to work on making things better.

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melovetv January 31 2010, 18:40:50 UTC
Ohhhh nooo - how's Jim going to get out of this one. I loved this chapter, so much action other than the main storyline that I almost forgot briefly about Bones - erm - forgetting! Yeah.

Anyway, another wonderful chapter and I just can't wait to see what happens next. Loving this story.

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laughter_now January 31 2010, 19:04:25 UTC
Since I think Andorians are rather adorable, it's only understandable that their peril distracted you from Bones' not so little problem.
Glad you enjoyed this chapter, thanks a lot.

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