Jealousy: PART XXXIII, PART XXXIV, PART XXXV

[laughs_muses]

JEALOUSY UPDATE!

Title: Jealousy: PART XXXIII, PART XXXIV, PART XXXV

Author: laughs_muses (fic journal)

Pairing: Draco Malfoy/Harry Potter

Rating: PG-13, PG-13, PG-13 (sorry)

Disclaimer: No, none of these characters are mine. If they were mine I wouldn’t be working absurd hours in a coffee shop, now would I? Nup, I’d be cruising around in my Merc with

Comments

[saratheflute]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

And softly from above he only just heard;

“I definitely only like Harry Potter boys.”

[dairygirl]

I'm not sure what you were nervous about. The scene was lovely--Ron letting Harry open up with only gentle prodding as he almost seemed to know before Harry spoke. So what if Harry cried? He was having conflicting feelings. It was an appropriate expression of those feelings especially with an empathetic friend. I look forward to the angst (and its resolution of course).

[original_lie]

OOOh Jess, it was beautiful! *squees at the last part* I ♥ your Ronnykins because... well because he's actually supporting his best friend.

um, think you may not have closed your italics tag just up there, but I could be wrong. Don't hurt me, please.

[laughs_muses]

Oh god, how embarrassing *g*. "Don't hurt me, please." Oh baby, I couldn't hurt you if I tried...actually, scratch that. I could definately hurt you if you wanted me to. *nudge*

Jess

[elysia_starlit]

Hi!

I, personlly, think it was fine. You could've played it eiter way - Harry steely and stand-off-ish "No, I don't", or Harry upset and emotional like you did. I mean, its not like you had him sobbing, so that's good. I think it was fine - but as author, you can always re-write for a later draft.

And the Harry Draco fluff was sweet.

Well done - am looking forward to more! :)

[cheezitthief]

*reads*

*melts*

*re-groups*

*re-reads*

*re-melts*

harry's coming out totally worked!!!! and i love that malfoy is just so adorable.

*LOVE*

^_^