Comments | laudanumdreams: [Fanfiction] - Gojyo/Hakkai

ms_legerdemain in laudanumdreams

[Fanfiction] - Gojyo/Hakkai - Scars

Jul 03, 2009 17:42

Happy birthday, butterflygirl_3. Your birthday is possibly the only thing that could ever make me write 58. :p I suspect I write 58 very badly, so I aplogise for that, but it's the thought that counts, right?

Title: Scars
Fandom: Saiyuki
Word Count: 675
Pairing: 58
Beta: Unbetaed...yes, I am a bad, wicked girl, and Sanzo should probably punish me. XD
Rating: PG ( Read more... )

fanfiction: saiyuki

Comments 19

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ms_legerdemain July 3 2009, 10:29:26 UTC

Aw, thankyou. <3 I may pimp it...if I feel like it. :p But it is all yours, whether I pimp it or not.

Well, I'm sure I can make it up to 53. At length. In detail. XD

As I say, I am not used to writing about people who are actually in love having sex/a relationship. It is quite odd. Quite odd.

*suspects it may be she who is, in fact, quite odd*

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ms_legerdemain July 5 2009, 01:36:48 UTC

Well, it's pimped now. XD

I feel 'work of art' might be pushing it a bit. :p

I don't know about my heart. I think it likes me to write angsty porn to distract it from the yawning vacuum within. :p

Noir and Florian from GC are a bit like that I suppose...though I feel the later chapter of GC tend to make one forget that Noir is actually a kinky fuck who likes to tie people up and whip them. :p

caeseria July 3 2009, 15:41:36 UTC

Ah, this is lovely. I think you've done a brilliant job! It has a perfect quality of stillness about it and I think you have captured their relationship very well.

Don't worry, I wibbled horribly the few times I have written 58 ;) You should so pimp this, I think people will love it as well! ♥

ms_legerdemain July 5 2009, 01:41:42 UTC

Aw, thankyou. (L) I'm glad I'm not the only one to wibble...writing them was such a headfuck after all the 53. Much as I like Hakkai, I find him insanely hard to write. Or maybe I just don't project my personality onto him to the same extent I do with poor Sanzo...:p

'Tis pimped now, so I shall totally hold you responsible for encouraging me to share if people don't like it. :p

nathcoelho July 5 2009, 02:06:16 UTC

owwwwww
so sad, beautiful, cute and lovely fic
i liked the way u put the view of gojyo in here
^^
Thanks for sharing this fic with us! =3

ms_legerdemain July 8 2009, 02:04:41 UTC

Thankyou, I'm glad you liked it. <3

Sharing was a pleasure! :) It's always so nice to get good feedback.

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ms_legerdemain July 8 2009, 02:06:26 UTC

Tehe, glad you liked it. :) Personally I'd probably go for some nice, angsty 53 for my rainy day, but each to their own. :p

makemegray July 5 2009, 04:47:21 UTC

Wow...for a blasphemer, this is really good, lol!

ms_legerdemain July 8 2009, 02:07:03 UTC

LOL, I'm going to take that as a compliment. XD