[Fanfiction] - Gojyo/Sanzo - Penance

[ms_legerdemain]

Written on a whim. I worry so much that they're OOC...

Title: Penance
Fandom: Saiyuki
Word Count: 601 (ZOMG so short...)
Beta: butterflygirl_3
Genre: Angst/Romance
Characters/Pairing: 35
Rating: R
Warnings: Angst, non-explicit rough sex, hints of dub-con, general darkness. Emotional dysfunctionality. Sanzo being a bit of a bastard. Well, more of a bastard than

Comments

[caeseria]

Oh. my. god. You have reduced me to a blubbering, non-functional individual. Go you!!! This'll teach me to read this at work.

I love this, it's dark, shocking, and raw. Just how I like my 53! This is very well written, you can see the unspoken truth hidden between the lines, (and the lies they spin between each other!) I like how they seem so breakable but strong at the same time, this really is a wonderful piece of writing that sums up perfectly (for me anyway) the dichotomy that is Sanzo/Gojyo. ♥'s you!!!

[ms_legerdemain]

*blushes* Too many compliments...you can't tell me all these things, I'll develop an ego. :p

I'm so glad you liked it. I was worried the unspoken truth might be a little bit too unspoken and between the lines when I wrote it, but apparently not. :) I got to the end of writing it and was torn between the urge to smack Sanzo for being an arse and snuggle him for being so screwed up...I'm so conflicted. *dramatic sigh* XD

I've discovered 53 has actually stolen my muses. I was trying to write 58 for a friend the other day, and just couldn't seem to manage it. It just wouldn't work. *eyeballs Gojyo and Sanzo* I blame you two.

lol, ♥ you too. XD

[caeseria]

HA! 53 will steal your muses, chew them up and spit them back out! Blame Sanzo and Gojyo and write them doing more bad stuff to each other in penance!

I read somewhere that Sanzo is 'emotionally damaged' and I think that fits him so perfectly. It also fits in well with our desires to either fuck him up completely or just want to snuggle him! ;)

[befanini]

Must. Not.
Get.
Attached...

Very nice. ♥

[caeseria]

LMAO @ icon!! I bet Sanzo has that tattooed on his hipbone or something just to remind himself everytime he gets his cock out ;)

Okay, that image was just wrong on so many levels.... ♥

[befanini]

Hee hee hee
Is actually from an actual pendant owned by helliongoddess, specially commissioned. ;)

Although now that you've said it... lmao

Bad caeseria! spankspank!!! XD XD XD

[caeseria]

Wow that's even cooler if it's an actual pendant!

Oh god, now you've posted Sanzo's fine arse. I'm dead. I'll need that spanking to revive me, thanks! XDDD

[pfmoi]

Fantastic. Just....fantastic.

[ms_legerdemain]

Aw, thankyou! I'm glad you think so. :)

[kura_ichy69]

Sanzo's so dark and cruel, i'm guessing he's the seme in this fic and Gojyo's the sentimental one with a broken heart, i love how you wrote it, its so different

[ms_legerdemain]

Thankyou! I'm really glad you like it. :) Yes, Sanzo's more seme in this, at least on an emotional level. Poor Gojyo...I'm a real bitch to him when I write fic. He always seems to end up being emotionally abused. :p

[mczebini]

Fucking....GAH.
Raw, sheer, powerful...angsty.
Ugh, it's gorgeous.
I love it!
35 excellence.
Thanks for cheering up my shitty day.

[ms_legerdemain]

LOL, I do like to hear a good 'gah' about my fic. XD

*blushes* Thankyou. <3 And I'm glad I could cheer you up on your shitty day. :)