The Loyal Opposition, Part 5 of ???

[latetothpartyhp]

Comments

[kitmerlot1213]

Very exciting!

I like that Chloe and Tess are still the two most intelligent people in the room. And I love that Lana did her best "Clark, I'm so delicate" look, and she still got in with a rifle--WOO HOO, good times :):)

[latetothpartyhp]

Tess is so under-used on the show, I thought I'd give her some page-time here. And then (spoiler alert) she went and almost overtook the story. I'm still beating her back. I honestly can't imagine why the show-runners don't seem to have the same problem. Maybe they just don't want yet another villain out-shining their poor hero?

[marija1991]

Ooh. Gripping chapter.

Cla... Kal-El takes Lana. Hm. God, I love your Chloe and Tess.

Tess is great in this. Love how you write her. The show needs more Tess.. She was only in Charade for about a minute.
Glad Clark listened to Chloe's idea, at least.

~Marija

[latetothpartyhp]

I love Cassidy Freeman's performance so much. When I started writing Tess I wanted to really do her performance justice, and give Tess a solid agenda of her own, and as a result she kinda took over the story for a while.

I really want to thank you for all your lovely comments! It made me feel guilty enough to dust off Chapter 14, which DID NOT want to get written, and try to boss it into shape. Should be able to post it tomorrow.

[marija1991]

Oh wow! Really? That's great news, thanks for that, can't wait! :)

You're welcome about all the comments, I'm just so in love with this fic, so I feel it deserves alot of love!

Thanks for taking the time to read my comments aswell!

Much Hugs
~Marija

[eternal_moonie]

Really great chapter!