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I Don't Mind A Little Trouble, Part 4

Feb 01, 2011 20:33

Title: I Don't Mind A Little Trouble
Author: FlyingHigh / latetothpartyhp
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Drama / Adventure
Pairings: Chloe/Oliver, back-ground Lollie
Spoilers: for Luthor
Warnings: For language, since all these characters have potty-mouths when I write them. Also, this is un-beta'd.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of these characters, and I am receiving ( Read more... )

chloe sullivan, lionel luthor, chlollie, fic: i don't mind a little trouble, martha kent, oliver queen

Comments 12

iluvaqt February 2 2011, 02:51:48 UTC

I like how Oliver can't help but continue to dig, which isn't a surprise, it's something her Oliver would do. :D I love that she told him about Watchtower and interesting how his use to belong to the Teagues. It wouldn't be a stretch for it to be true of her universe either. Edward had been in hiding for awhile, I think after the Queens died or even after Swann died. I'm like those Hungry Hippos, the more you feed me, it's never enough. I love this universe and that Chloe's there.

latetothpartyhp February 2 2011, 03:05:35 UTC

I like the idea of Oliver giving her a little taste of her own medicine. ; )

This universe has become my little obsession. In my mind I've plotted out what Pete, Lana and Jason are all up to, what happened to Martian Manhunter, how Jonathan died, etc. -- and I'll probably never be able to think of ways to write it all in. In my mind the tower is connected to Veritas in some way, I just haven't figured out what yet.

iluvaqt February 2 2011, 04:33:15 UTC

All that stained glass, I was thinking it could have more to do with Genevieve's French roots. Maybe her family owned the building, and it was heritage listed, so even after she died, nobody was allowed to demolish it or anything. Jason being close to Oliver, maybe they hung out there as kids, it was like an old spooky place they played in while the grown ups talked shop downstairs in the apartment levels.

latetothpartyhp February 7 2011, 02:08:01 UTC

Ooooh. I like the idea connecting Genevieve to the stained glass. I wonder if there are any secret Veritas codes in their design....

nivieniv February 2 2011, 06:13:39 UTC

Gazoo... bwahaaha! I love this.

Gosh, I love your characterization of Chloe and AU Ollie.. they just comes across very believeable. I could picture this happening on a good version of SV.

I'm a little curious if AU Oliver will find out more about our Oliver.. maybe even meet him?.. wait no! Don't answer that! I don't wanna be spoiled.

Great update, I really can't wait for more! :D

latetothpartyhp February 7 2011, 02:00:28 UTC

"I could picture this happening on a good version of SV."

Ha! This slays me. SLAYS me, I tell ya. 'Cuz no other show I've ever watched has needed a corrective "good version" like this one.

(And thank you. That was incredibly flattering.)

I like the idea of Oliver vs. Oliver! But who would win?

abarbiestory February 2 2011, 07:09:52 UTC

SERIOUSLY IN LOVE WITH THIS UNIVERSE!!

latetothpartyhp February 5 2011, 19:43:57 UTC

Yay!

I know I'm becoming pretty obsessed with it. I think I'm starting to ship Me/This Universe. Chlollie's almost becoming an afterthought!

eternal_moonie February 7 2011, 12:33:14 UTC

Absolutely LOVE this chapter!

latetothpartyhp February 11 2011, 02:28:54 UTC

I love this chapter too. Not that I have favorites or anything, but if I did this chapter would probably be it.

jenwin23 April 17 2011, 20:13:03 UTC

Who is Andrea? I looked up a whole list of JLA members over the years and no Andrea...

latetothpartyhp April 17 2011, 23:18:30 UTC

Andrea is Andrea Rojas, the Angel of Vengeance; she's based on the DC comics character Acrata:

http://smallville.wikia.com/wiki/Andrea_Rojas