Comments | latenightmuse: The Other Side: Part One; Torchwood fic, Ianto/Jack

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The Other Side: Part One; Torchwood fic, Ianto/Jack

Dec 16, 2009 02:59

Author name: erikssiren
Title: The Other Side
Fandom: Torchwood
Rating: R for swearing and adult situations
Summary: Set immediately following the events of Children of Earth, Jack tries to find a way to escape his pain, Gwen struggles to cope and Ianto Jones is alive. But he was never dead in the first place. Was he ( Read more... )

rating: r, character: gwen cooper, fandom: torchwood, title: the other side, character: rose tyler, character: ianto jones, caracter: lois habbiba, character: mickey smith, character: tenth doctor, character: martha jones, pairing: jack/ianto, character: jack harkness

Comments 8

moowithme113 December 17 2009, 20:03:36 UTC

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All for now, will comment coherently when thoughts can be formed, and I have the chance to read this again when I get home from work. But !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

erikssiren December 18 2009, 05:34:35 UTC

That was exactly my reaction when I saw your comment! It seriously saddens me that no one had left me any feedback. I mean, it's probably my fault because I haven't x-posted this anywhere other than scifibigbang but I was hoping to get a little response first. And if it weren't so late now I'd do it. Maybe tomorrow.

Anyway. I hope you like the rest of it!

jantoforever21 December 19 2009, 23:06:45 UTC

That was wonderful! And I love the art as well!

erikssiren December 20 2009, 05:40:21 UTC

Thank you! I adore the art too, she did an amazing job.

fiddler_on_roof December 20 2009, 01:02:22 UTC

squee! I love fix it fic and I love it when Gwen is a scrappy and irrational pregnant woman and I just plain love Ianto not being dead

erikssiren December 20 2009, 05:42:27 UTC

I tried really hard not to be biased when writing Gwen. I did my best to keep her in character yet tried to take some of the annoying-ness of her character out. So I'm glad you liked her! And Ianto not being dead is probably the best thing for the world, lol. I'm glad you like it!

twilighthdfan December 20 2009, 06:32:57 UTC

Ooh loved this chapter. Gwen is kick ass in this. And I love the new Torchwood team (although not as much as the old one). Loved how you described Rhys too.

Poor Jack - love that he went into the armed forces.

And the way Ianto described death and then coming back from it. Can't wait to read what's going on with him. And the Ianto look-alike (or is it Ianto?)

*off to read the next chapter* :)

erikssiren December 29 2009, 16:21:09 UTC

I did my best to be fair to Gwen and keep her in character since, although I really hate her, I don't want my fics to bash her either. I'm glad you like her! I'm always afraid my characterizations are off.

I'm glad you liked that! I just figured he'd been a part of some war most of his very long life that he would probably feel the most at home (outside of Torchwood) with the military.

Though this comment is late and you've already read the fic, you'll just have to read the rest to figure it out!