Comments | lasertooth: 2 poems

lasertooth

2 poems

Mar 30, 2006 20:42

I wrote these for my class. I'm gonna submit a poem to some contest on monday. So tell me which one you think is better. if you feel so inclined ( Read more... )

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go_like_this March 31 2006, 03:32:22 UTC

i like the first one. a lot.

lydiaismissing March 31 2006, 03:43:31 UTC

What contest? Allow me to be your competition.

Haha, I very much enjoyed the second one, but I would have to say I am in support of the first one.

lasertooth March 31 2006, 05:20:47 UTC

i don't actually know anything about the competition except that its due monday and application are at M-30 in the William Pitt Union.

thesteelyears April 1 2006, 14:30:57 UTC

first one, yes.

my life, with time thickerbranches April 18 2006, 07:50:02 UTC

I always say I’ll become a cat lady with sore hips and swishy running outfits. But I’ll be allergic to cats, and too sore and fat to run. I’ll shop at the Cracker Barrel store and collect cat photos as a hobby. My couch will have a plastic cover over it and my jowls will shake with rage when I speak about today's youth. If your ball lands on my side of the fence, it's my property -- I’ll say. And I will be hated and bitter. I will die alone, episodes of The Golden Girls playing in the background. And as I drift off into my drooling and final moments of conciousness I’ll murmur, half alive, "That Blanche, such a slut..."