Comments | lar_laughs: Challenge #03a: Midnight Vigil

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Challenge #03a: Midnight Vigil

Dec 09, 2011 00:00

Written for a challenge at writerverse

Title: Midnight Vigil
Word Count 994
Rating: PG
Original/Fandom: Original
Pairings (if any) none
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): none
Summary: Sequel to Safe and Cookies. Svea has finally decided that tonight is the night she sneaks away from her Uncle and Aunt's house. Her mother is sick but she doesn't think ( Read more... )

challenge, original, 2011, cousins, when night falls

Comments 2

meridian_rose December 9 2011, 10:50:28 UTC

I've been waiting to see what you'd do for this challenge and I'm glad it's this 'verse, that we get to know more about Svea.

Poor Svea, all her planning almost for naught. I'm really starting to dislike Becca, who sends off her eldest daughter to spend time with her new babies, and seems distrustful of Svea. Stalkers; was Becca maybe an actress, singer or other entertainer? I'm not sure what professions are available in this world yet :D

Donovan sounds efficient at his job but friendly, bringing her books and drawing paper.

I'm excited for the next part of the challenge and what we have to do with these fics, and I'll be waiting to see what you do this this one ;D

lar_laughs December 9 2011, 15:04:09 UTC

I feel bad that Becca comes across poorly in this story! There were a couple lines of her story that got cut out due to the fact that I can't seem to keep my word count low these days. It gives me a direction to go with the next bit, though. I will have to rectify that!