LJ Idol, Season 10, Week 3 - Brushback Pitch

[lapis_lazuli615]

“Now’s the perfect time. We’ve figured out the other clues, we just have to follow through on them. But they don’t have the first clue where the third clue leads, and we do. So we do the hard part first and then wipe the table with them while they’re still trying to work their way through the first two

Comments

[eternal_ot]

Even I didn't knew there was something called a "stage's left". This was an interesting set up and I am intrigued. Hoping to see the next instalment soon.

[lapis_lazuli615]

stage right, stage left, up stage and down stage (which are backwards from what one might think, or maybe not.)
I honestly don't know if there's any more to this story, but I didn't know THIS bit was around, so I guess we'll see! :)

[n3m3sis43]

I really liked the dialogue in this piece. :)

[lapis_lazuli615]

Dialogue does seem to be one of my strengths. Sometimes I'm afraid my pieces are TOO dialogue-heavy.

[rayaso]

Really nice dialogue, and it left me wanting to know how it turns out.

[lapis_lazuli615]

Thanks, I have no clue myself. Perhaps the next topic will spark Don and the mysterious "I" to tell me! :)

[j0ydivided]

I really enjoyed the setup in this. Nicely done!

[lapis_lazuli615]

Thanks. I wasn't sure if people would see how I was linking it to the topic or not.

[bleodswean]

Great job with an action-packed, dialogue-heavy set-up! You hooked me. I loved this line - I’d like to say I sighed, but I’m sure it came out more like a sob.

[lapis_lazuli615]

Haven't we all had those sigh/sob moments?
Definitely dialogue-heavy. I worry about that sometimes.