Drabbles: After Enemy At The Gate POVs

[lantean_breeze]

Well I finally got around to those drabbles, and they were pretty fun to write.  Each one has to do with the final scene of Enemy at the Gate, the series finale, and the thoughts each character has during the balcony scene or shortly afterward.  Each drabble is 100 words exactly.  As usual, any feedback will be appreciated. :)

John

Comments

[wanted_a_pony]

Cool! McKay's & Woolsey's POV are definitely my favorites: Rodney's because I think his mind really is like that, always churning & making leaps & then bouncing back to the most important points; & Richard's because it's easy to forget how great a toll his tenseness & anxiety must take from him, behind his stiffly-correct mask.

Thank you for writing & sharing these!

[lantean_breeze]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked them. I try to write the characters "in-character" and I'm glad that you think that was done. :)

[patk]

Oh, I like what you did here. Their thoughts ring really natural and very much in character and I like the individual versions of wanting to back to Pegasus. :-)

[lantean_breeze]

Thank you so much! I'm happy you like them.

[hickman1937]

I like them all but really love Woolsey. It feels so authentic.

[lantean_breeze]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked them. :)