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"I Could Never Be Your Woman." (Dono Vorrutyer/Olivia Koudelka) PG

Jul 04, 2012 18:13

Title: I Could Never Be Your Woman. (On Archive Of Our Own)
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vorkosigan fic, vorkosigan, fpf, kink bingo, dono vorrutyer, olivia koudelka

Comments 6

dswdiane July 4 2012, 23:44:40 UTC

Brilliantly written. You capture and create wonderful characterization for both of them.

lannamichaels July 4 2012, 23:45:35 UTC

Thank you!

danceswchopstck July 5 2012, 01:04:09 UTC

Oo, very intriguing! I like the way you captured Dono's feelings of disorientation or confusion or something I'm not sure I have a word for. Excellent!

lannamichaels July 5 2012, 01:06:41 UTC

Thank you!

jedishampoo July 13 2012, 19:42:12 UTC

Neat concept, and I enjoyed reading it! I like your Olivia, through Dono's eyes. It's wonderful to find something with her in it. :)

lannamichaels July 13 2012, 21:46:04 UTC

Thank you!