Fic: Come Lay Low and Love Me

Nov 22, 2010 20:11

Written for the px_flashbang challenge. Whoo!

Pairing: Pete/Patrick
Word Count: 3,005
Rating/Warnings: PG, contains non sexual kink (puppy play)
Note: In the same 'verse as my BBB fic Love and a Bit with a Dog, FYI. You don't need to read that for this, though. Thanks to
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fall out boy, band!fic

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languisity November 23 2010, 16:42:21 UTC
Hahah, wow. Well, that's a happy coincidence? I'm really glad that you enjoyed this bit of the story as well. Thanks so much for reading!

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xlindziex November 24 2010, 00:05:40 UTC
Ahaha, this was adorable =)
I loved how Patrick got a collar for Pete, it just makes it that much better. And the way you just made it work without changing their personalities just made it better.

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languisity November 24 2010, 02:38:02 UTC
Thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked it :)

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megyal November 30 2010, 22:58:55 UTC
I don't even know how I feel about this. It's so sharp and yet so blurred at the same time, I think it's brilliant.

There's another tendency Pete has, and that's to operate under the impression that Patrick does a lot of things to humor him, which is ironic; Patrick doesn't have the patience to humor Pete a lot of the time.

I just love that line, I read it like four times.

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languisity November 30 2010, 23:46:44 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

And I'm glad you like that line. I honestly couldn't things any other way with them, haha.

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