Comments | languisity: Two Little Girls: Part Two

languisity

Two Little Girls: Part Two

Jun 10, 2010 21:41

( and you were in the wrong place at the wrong time )

fall out boy, big bang, chchchchchallenges, two little girls, band!fic

Comments 21

adellyna June 11 2010, 23:17:08 UTC

THIS IS AMAZING AND YOU ARE AMAZING AND IT WAS SUCH AN HONOR TO READ ALONG AND WATCH IT COME TO FRUITION. I love your Penny and how perfect she is, and especially (of course, I'm predictable) your Megan! ♥_♥

languisity June 13 2010, 03:06:47 UTC

♥♥♥!

allyndra June 12 2010, 03:03:30 UTC

This is really great! Even though it has a plot, it feels very slice-of-life. Penny and Megan and Anna are all so well fleshed out; they feel solid.

Thanks for sharing this!

languisity June 13 2010, 03:08:54 UTC

Thanks so much! I really tried make them (especially Anna as there's so little known about her) real people, so I'm glad that came through. :)

sinuous_curve June 12 2010, 04:15:00 UTC

This story still makes me so happy. ♥

languisity June 13 2010, 03:09:28 UTC

♥ :)

harborshore June 12 2010, 09:46:51 UTC

Oh, this is wonderful. Sharp and sweet and wonderful. ♥

languisity June 13 2010, 03:10:02 UTC

Thank you so much. ♥

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languisity June 14 2010, 05:39:10 UTC

♥

Anna's not just a footnote on the way to Penny/Megan, she's a real character and not only the big bad.

Yeah, I thought *a lot* about that as I was writing her, to the point where I was actually sad to be breaking them up when the time came. I also felt like she needed to be real to make sense in how she mattered to Penny. So yeah, I'm just so glad her, idk, personhood stood out.

♥ to the rest of your comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.