Cravings

[tasyfa]

Cravings

crouch
             low
sweetness dripping into my mouth
heat shimmers from
burning skin
cheek thigh tongue clit
ka-boom

Comments

[femmenerd]

Ka-boom indeed!

I like your word placement--it's effective but not overwrought.

Also, those last two lines--the succession of nouns paints a picture--a sexy picture.

[tasyfa]

Thanks, darling. *mwah* I'm glad that the succession of nouns works. :)