Permanence (31_days, 20/03)

[langs_de_lijn]

Title: It Stays Forever Permanence
Series: Uhm...
Rating: R for dark themes/implications and my love of the word 'fuck'
Warnings: Implied rape, dark themes.
Characters: Sven Kramer
Pairing: none
Disclaimer: 101% lies and untruths.
Word Count: 510.
Notes:

Comments

[zimena]

You automatically have me when you put a rape warning in your header. Even if there's precisely no detail here, you managed to get the emotions across really well.

Don't feel bad for what you write. I'm very glad you posted this!

[langs_de_lijn]

Lol way to fail at responding, self!

Heh, I knew that'd net me at least someone. Angst whores unite! \o/ Anyway, I'm glad you think I handled it well. (As for detail, well, it's not like I don't do the stream-of-consciousness thing better anyway.) And thanks. :)

(Ahoy from the far-off future of two weeks later!)

[langs_de_lijn]

Heavy stuff!
Yeah, I was really hesitant about posting this at first. Of course, now I'm sort of writing a longer and angstier version.

I like the way you do the fragmented stream of consciousness, it really works for this theme.
I like streams of consciousness. They don't involve actions. >:)

Especially for this character, who seems to me a Control Freak "pur sang", for lack of an English phrase ;)
Not that I know anything about control freakery, she said unconvincingly.

[langs_de_lijn]

Way to be evil. I just need to know how to structure it and get around the BFF-ery and supportiveness and the creepiness that's Mueller. Because clearly it needs some h/c of the BFF variety.