Comments | lanerose: (KS/KH) Dodge Roll

lanerose

(KS/KH) Dodge Roll

Jan 26, 2008 23:41

So, once upon a time, something like a year and a half ago, myself and my two good friends were watching the second season of Kaleido Star. They introduced a character named Leon, who shared a voice actor with Cloud Strife of FFVII / KH fame, and had long silver hair. A wonderful, cracktastic crossover idea was born. And now, it's finally a fic ( Read more... )

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Comments 3

aisuyoukai January 27 2008, 22:28:54 UTC

Too cute! That was a very unique and interesting crossover. I liked it. The pairing was adorable.

I found it a bit choppy at times though... although for being a one-shot it wasn't too bad a thing. The worst part was with Cerberus though. It seemed odd to just have this random battle and then not much of a reaction to it.

Other than that though... great fic! Keep it up. ^_^

lanerose January 27 2008, 23:56:40 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

And I agree about it being a bit choppy. The beginning is nice and smooth, but from the training scenes it loses a certain something. I think it's because I went from telling a full story to giving slice of life moments of Sora's training. The two styles fit together a little bit slipshod. Regarding Cerebrus... ::shrug:: Maybe I just had too clear an idea in my own head what happened and didn't explain well. It does happen. ^^;;;

Thank you for the con. crit! I really appreciate it~!!!

aisuyoukai January 28 2008, 16:57:24 UTC

Yeah, which isn't so bad. The "slice story" thing, I mean. But for anything other than a one-shot it wouldn't work. That all aside, it's a really nice fic anyway. ^_^

Of course! I was kinda glad that suddenly there was some Kaleido Star post! I thought it was dead. X3 Good job!