HoS: Recoil

[lanerose]

Comments

[skyler_daemon]

I like your 'When they find Ed' better then mines. So are you doing it in all of their viewpoints(Roy, Masuta, Al, and Riza) of Ed's stint in the Hospital.

[lanerose]

I didn't intend to... but I think you may have just bunny'd me into it. The main reason this got written was because I read and loved yours but kept sitting there with a jumping bunny who desperately wanted more. This was *supposed* to be all four of them, but Riza took over when I wasn't looking and demanded it be all about her. I kinda like the idea of Ed being quasi comatose for a little bit - or at the very least, being silent / unnaturally quiet. Does that work with how you envisioned it? I don't *think* it contradicts any of what you said, but I may add that to my bunny list if it's cool with you. 'Cause, you know - the only thing better than Ed angst is angst about Ed. ^.~

[skyler_daemon]

It works perfectly and I've been bunny'ing everyone it seems. Yes Angst about Ed is The Angst since we know that misery loves company.

[lanerose]

::nodnodnod:: Absolutely!!!