The Quiet Things That No One Ever Knows

[landsharkkidd]

Title: The Quiet Things That No One Ever Knows
Author: landsharkkidd
Characters/Pairings: Mostly Mark/Eduardo, a bit of Eduardo/OFC and bit of Mark/OFC
Rating: M
Warning(s): Gay scenes (heh) and an awkward writer, also Eduardo being dark and evil near the end. >D It turns Mark on. Also a very poor excuses of a sex scene with nothing too describing of what they

Comments

[sarcasticdream]

q>Chris and Dustin are back at HQ!” Mark could hear Andrews voice from the living room. I think you meant Eduardo there >) And is your Freya from Merlin? She is an adorable character in the series, but the name of this girl in your story just reminded me of her.

[landsharkkidd]

omg! Thank you for pointing that out. I can't proof read for shit. I need to learn how to do that more often!

I never knew that. I've actually never seen Merlin, I feel bad for saying that. :3 aha.

But thanks again for reading and pointing the name mistake out! :D

[sarcasticdream]

Yes, I know exactly what you mean with the proof-reading, I certainly had my fair share of problems with it.
Nothing to feel bad about though, Freya is just a name, even though I adore Merlin and of course the first person that came to mind was her... My fault entirely.
And the story was pretty good too, even though I hope you will continue something in this verse. I would kill for the description of Sean`s reaction to Mark betraying him for Eduardo. And the Smug!Eduardo!!! Oh, the mental images...

[landsharkkidd]

I used the name Freya for my old George Weasley fan fic (On Mibba ha, tho it never got finished)

And thank you again! This was actually my first time writing a TSN and a m/m fan fic to be honest. But I might do another one like before this.