Comments | landrews: 5-0 Fic: I FEEL YOUR TEARS, S/D, RATED NC-17 (mild), 1/1

landrews

5-0 Fic: I FEEL YOUR TEARS, S/D, RATED NC-17 (mild), 1/1

May 01, 2012 12:54

Okay- still finding writing guy slash a challenge :-/ LOL - But, learning new skills is good, right ( Read more... )

danny, brother, s/d, completed fic, h5-0 fic, hawaii five-0, steve

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simplyn2deep May 1 2012, 17:32:37 UTC

that was all sorts of hot and emotional and just ugh

landrews May 1 2012, 21:36:11 UTC

:jumpsupanddown: That 'ugh' makes me so happy :-)

simplyn2deep May 1 2012, 21:37:23 UTC

so long as you know it's not a bad thing lol

landrews May 1 2012, 22:28:14 UTC

Totally got that! Thank you :-)

bfive0 May 1 2012, 22:43:04 UTC

Why did I just read this?! Why am I letting you break my poor little heart one story a time?!!

landrews May 2 2012, 15:12:44 UTC

LOL- IDK! It's fun?

dante_s_hell May 2 2012, 00:05:03 UTC

This was just amazing! Steve's need, want...his desperation is palpable. It's so, so good. And the end...my heart cracked.

Great story!

landrews May 2 2012, 15:16:54 UTC

:gluesyourhearttogether: :kissesit: Thank you! I'm so glad to know that desperation comes through, it's so hard to tell when you're writing, isn't it? What's enough without being too much :-) I always feel like SPN's Chuck: Writing's hard! lolol

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landrews May 2 2012, 15:20:13 UTC

Oh, wow! Thank you. :hugsyou: I do have more in mind, so I'm glad you're liking the angsty-angst :-)

antivol May 2 2012, 07:51:47 UTC

Steve's intensity is almost unbearable in this, it's so well written! Great piece, thanks a lot for sharing!

landrews May 2 2012, 15:21:25 UTC

:dances: Thank you so much for the kind feedback :beams: