Veterans Day

Nov 11, 2009 11:26

The silent room, 
no coughing or sighing.
The lonely trumpet-call of
taps
wavers in the chill November air,
and wind bears it to the room 
with a sharp, hissing whisper.

The blinds clatter
with metallic
indifference.

We gather our breath
and begin the day again.

poem, writing

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callioperato November 11 2009, 23:42:32 UTC
I like this a lot. The line about the lonely trumpet call is great, as are the last two lines.

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lancaster1250 November 11 2009, 23:46:17 UTC
Thanks Becky. I really appreciate it.

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cwmackowski November 12 2009, 03:08:52 UTC
Those indifferent blinds said a lot.

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