*laughs* Nicely done. You had Henry down to a tee, with his excitement about the fairy tales and his determination that others just need to remember. Of course a true love's kiss breaks any spell. And of course Arthur and Merlin are different.
I love your back and forth between the legends (I loved Arthur's last line about that. He is legend-dary.) and the real world. Harry was really cute betting with Emma that they were characters. Of course Emma would be hostile. It was amusing to see Arthur face off with Granny and Emma. The bone disease curse was really creative. The only bone to pick is just how out of the blue Arthur got his memories back. Or maybe it just seemed that way to me. He was just talking to Henry and then poof the veil parted. Hahaha you know on second thought Dr. Whale? My sister is telling the truth and this is the easiest place to keep her out of harm. Though to get to where I think Arthur was going, it would be the same place Belle was kept right? Arthur couldn't have just gotten there from running. Besides those two points, I still loved your crossover :)
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The bone disease curse was really creative.
The only bone to pick is just how out of the blue Arthur got his memories back. Or maybe it just seemed that way to me. He was just talking to Henry and then poof the veil parted.
Hahaha you know on second thought Dr. Whale? My sister is telling the truth and this is the easiest place to keep her out of harm. Though to get to where I think Arthur was going, it would be the same place Belle was kept right? Arthur couldn't have just gotten there from running.
Besides those two points, I still loved your crossover :)
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