New DS fic: Timing

Jul 07, 2007 09:14

This is the story I posted to prettylikepaul as a wee gift for brooklinegirl.

Timing (F/K, 1650 words, NC-17)

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rattlecatcher July 7 2007, 14:01:49 UTC
Oh. Hell. Yeah.

Sexy and impolite. I can deal.

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lamardeuse July 7 2007, 22:02:55 UTC
Hee. Glad to hear it! :)

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lamardeuse July 8 2007, 01:45:01 UTC
Thanks, hon. They are such fun, aren't they? :)

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eotu July 7 2007, 19:49:44 UTC
“Oh, I believe that with some effort I can be sufficiently rude,” he promised, as he pinned Ray's wrists to the mattress with a firm grasp and drew back to deliver.

Nnnngh! That is so hot. Thank you for revving up a slow afternoon.

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lamardeuse July 8 2007, 01:45:54 UTC
Glad I could help! Thanks. :)

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retrofit88 July 9 2007, 07:10:54 UTC
“If it makes you feel any better, I can belong to you, too. If, uh, if you want.”

awww.

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lamardeuse July 9 2007, 09:42:58 UTC
Thank you! :)

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rodneyscat July 10 2007, 13:46:43 UTC
“Never say 'rectify' when you got your cock up somebody's ass.”

Well actually, Fraser can get away with that. In that way Fraser manages to defy a couple of laws I have about what I find sexy in slash (although I always love a sense of humor in bed: “Was that within the ten seconds, Ray?” Fraser asked, almost sweetly.)

I hope you don't mind I extended your fic a bit in my mind? *has visions of Fraser giving it good to Ray*

Thanks for sharing!

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lamardeuse July 10 2007, 16:18:05 UTC
I hope you don't mind I extended your fic a bit in my mind? *has visions of Fraser giving it good to Ray*

You go right ahead! That was part of the purpose of the fic - let's all use our (smutty) imaginations. :) Thanks for commenting!

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