Carved Your Name Into Me, 1/5

[lalowint]

Title: Carved Your Name Into Me
Author: lalowint
Fandoms: The Social Network, True Blood 'verse
Pairing: Mark/Eduardo, hints of Dustin/Chris
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,651 (this part)
Disclaimer: I claim no ownership to any of the characters within The Social Network or the True Blood 'verse.
Summary: Eduardo Saverin walks into a vampire bar.

Comments

[xbriyeon]

Christ, that was hot. \o/

(makes me glad I've seen a few eps of TB before so it didn't feel entirely unfamiliar, lol)

gonna be a bit nit-picky though =X

Mark’s grabs at the collar of what is probably an expensive shirt and tears it open.
should be Mark without the 's

“please,” he says, grasping at Mark’s shoulders,
&
“what?” Eduardo says, groggy and disoriented.
and the beginning of these two should be capitalized at the beginning

[lalowint]

OOops! Thank you for catching that extra apostrophe-S! My eyes glanced right over it!

The capitalization thing, though, is actually intentional. :) You'll find a couple of grammatical errors done for emphasis (or hitting a word lightly) throughout the entire fic. It might drive you crazy! Sorry! :)