Edward's POV (Love Net)

[lalinacullen]

I stared at the computer screen in complete shock.

Hey Sexy,

Guess who’s going to be in LA Feb 13-15? Want to be my Valentine? ;))

B.

I minimized the screen, pushed back from my desk and walked out of my barrack into the bright sunshine. Standing there I pinched the bridge of my nose between my fingers and mentally berated myself.

What the fuck are you

Comments

Love it!!

[fricky_writer22]

Hiya- Mandy ( Masochistic_Lamb from 'Twilighted') here :)

First off, thanks a million for sending me the link! I have been wondering what's been going on in Edward's head this whole time and I was excited to know you'd written this glimpse into his reasons behind everything he did.

I really think you did an excellent job with this. While he did a bad thing, that's obvious, you made me feel his reasons behind it. It didn't come off like some sleazy guy lookin' for a hook-up. It was a guy caught in a bad marriage who turns to the chat room just to get away...and unintentionally bumps into his soul mate

Re: Love it!!

[lalinacullen]

You're welcome :)) I posted 2 other EPOV so take a look. I am really glad you empathize w/ my characters, that makes me happy! And don't we all just want to cuddle Edward? lol

Sorry for taking so long to reply!! Glad you've enjoyed the story so far!

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[luxferi]

Hello there, this is HeavenDust from twilighted.net... first off, thank you for your link to this backstory, and secondly, this is great work! I know this sounds greedy but I need more, LOL. I'm going to look through your LJ to see if there are more later.

It's interesting to note that Edward was still having sex with Tanya, albeit with no enthusiasm. Humans are flawed and make mistakes, and I'm glad you didn't put your characters on a pedestal and live like saints. Speaking of, the depth of your characters is astounding. It's multi-dimensional and complex and many layered, which makes a very satisfying read.

All in all, just wanna say I really appreciate you sharing this fic, I love it so much and hope to hear from you. ;) You're one hell of a writer!

[lalinacullen]

Thanks :)) So glad you like the whole story... No, my characters deft have big flaws. I find it challenging to make everything shades of grey and see how ppl root for the lovers to be together despite the moral issues involved! Hopefully you got a chance to read the other 2 EPOV that are posted (sorry it took so long to reply to this!)

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[tatianam42]

I loved EPOV and would love more, but what I really am dying for is what the hell Tanya has on Edward. I so hate her, even if we have the same name.

[lalinacullen]

Sorry for such a late reply!! I have posted 2 more POV afer this one so go check them out :)) One last EPOV will be released this weekend as well

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[cullenlovin]

Hey! It's Team Edward from Twi.net. Now that I see where Edward was coming from I hate him a little less in this story. He seems to be conflicted, which most people are when making tough decisions. Hes trying to be the good guy for everyone and thats not possible given the situation which secretly turns him into the bad guy we hate. Obviously, I'm still here:)