This Fire | STXI | PG-13 | 2/?

[lalazee]

Title: This Fire II
Series: STXI AU
Rating: PG-13
Length: ~3,800
Warnings: Allusions to a very troubled past. Also, unbeta’ed & mistakes are mine.
Summary: A year in the life of one James T. Kirk, age seventeen, and his time spent in Pike’s Institute for Higher Learning.
Disclaimer: Somewhere over the slash rainbow of my mind, it happened. But not in

Comments

[lalazee]

Hahaha YESSS. I mean, if our minds go to sex imagining Spock all in black, then a seventeen year old boy has no change hehe.

Heroes is definitely in the same like as X-Men; I totally approve of the Sylar-esque undertones XD Thank you for reading darlin!

[carouselcycles]

YOU TEASE. ARGH. STOPPING RIGHT WHEN I AM SO IMMERSED.

Words cannot describe adequately how much I love this verse. Jim and Spock are brilliant as always and you write them so well, especially when they're at each other's throats like they are here. I also really like Jim's voice in this one. It's incredibly fun to read and you've managed to keep him as a sympathetic character even though he's kind of a douche.

BUT REALLY. ALL OF IT IS AMAZING AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.

[lalazee]

LOL I'm glad that you're sympathetic to douchey Jim. NOT GONNA LIE, one of my favourite things to do is see how much of a dick I can make a character and see if people will still like him bahaha. Thank you for your kind comments as always, my dear <3

[tuthillv]

Woo hoo! I'm so excited for the rest of this!! :D
I feel so bad for poor Jim! :(
and Spock is B.A. fighting with words... And soon with fists with Jim. Exciting!!! :D

[lalazee]

Fists and powers in the next chapter, it's gonna be action-packed! (I dont actually write action sequences so LOL WE'LL SEE HOW THAT GOES) I'm excited that you're excited! :D

[lalazee]

YOU KNOW ME AND CLIFFHANGERS. WE'RE BEST FRIENDS. Fight scene next, I hope you like it! :D

[ariadnechan]

wow in black!!!
all tall in black!!!
i'm dead now only for that!!
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mind returning!
i love Xmen so this is awesome!!! but sybok has powers in the movies he convince people and see trough them, he can have the same ability no?

i want to know what Bones can do!!!!

ans i love that Spock is a little like Jane Gray/fenix and Jim is a little like Rouge!

and Jim will fall for Spock pretty soon!

because he is the fight instructor and he is all tall in black!!!!!

.... dead again....

[lalazee]

Spock is definitely based of Jean Grey, and Jim has an essence of Rogue in him. That probably wasn't even on purpose, but considering Rogue is my favourite X-Men it's hard not to channel her sometimes hehe.

Anyway, more Spock in black next part! :D Thank you for reading, darlin! <3

[ariadnechan]

hey Rougue is my fav too!!!

and in my head canon she is daughter of mystic and magneto!