i want someone who will never betray me

[lalawrites]

Title: The Motionless Hours (III)
Disclaimer: all made up
Characters: Fernando Torres, Martin Škrtel, Sergio Ramos, the Liverpool crowd
Rating: PG-13 for this part
Summary: AU. Fernando is obsessive compulsive. Martin doesn’t hold back

Comments

[bluethursdays]

Can you believe, and this is no lie, I woke up this morning and randomly thought that it'd been a long time since I'd read this?

I squee'd really loudly when I saw this pop up on my f-list. Because, as always, it was perfect. Their first kiss, Fernando's little ticks, the list of people that piss Martin off, everything was perfect. *loves*

[lalawrites]

Haha, I actually have the entire thing already written and I wait a month between updates to frustrate you.

Just kidding. :) That would be mean.

[ringhelediel]

tbh it's a lil awkward having Nando paired off with Skittles, but as long as the story's good im game. neat update! boy, Nino do yer over-analyze or whaat.

[lalawrites]

thanks for reading anyway. Though I maintain there are definitely more Fernando/Martin photos than there are Fernando/Danny photos...so, um, there's a teensy bit of evidence?

[ringhelediel]

tbh ive never actually seen a scandalous pic of Nando/Agger!!!! i think its the tattoos!!

[lalawrites]

Oh, Sergio. That's not the last time we'll hear of him either, I'm afraid.

[robbie96]

Martin raised his eyebrows at Fernando's meticulous way of eating, the way he took even sized bites from left to right. Fernando even folded his napkins into small squares before throwing them away. It was almost charming.

"Star Wars is way cooler than Star Trek," Fernando said, running his hand across the shelf to press the books even, "I don't watch anime, and Harry Potter is a classic.

LOL....this was great....you've captured Fer's geekiness or is it gawkiness to a tee LOL (I like your depiction of Fernando )....your story is quite charming and a pleasure to read....Cheers ;D

[lalawrites]

He can't help it! He spends more time with fictional characters than real people!

[jumping_down]

Yes! You've updated! I sincerely think you're one of the best writers out there. ♥

[jumping_down]

Sigh. I loved this as always. I just think your characterization of OC-Fernando is just brilliant. I especially adored his paranoia about getting intimate with Martin! And Montse's cameo with Rafa! Haha.

You said I was work, and I'm sorry I am. I'm trying to be better at this, but I'm scared I can't be any better, and please, stay with me a little longer. Take it or leave it, but if you're going to leave, please don't leave so soon. I'm still trying to do all the right things that will make you keep liking me.

Why did I find this just downright adorably romantic? XP

[jumping_down]

Oh, and I just felt so relieved when Fernando finally became happier without Sergio. ♥

Mmkay, I shall stop spamming you now.

[lalawrites]

Aww, your comments always make me feel really, really good.

Fernando is such a romantic-in-hiding.

*pokes* Will there be anymore Danny/Nando/Harry/Xabi/Stevie anytime in the near or distant future?