The Long Surrender: 5/??

Nov 12, 2010 00:20

Title: The Long Surrender
Author: lalalive23 
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Fluff and sadness, swearing
Summary: AU. Matt moved to Spain immediately after his lover left him to continue his work on the Spanish guitar. When Dom takes a holiday with his new fiancee, his world gets turned upside down and nothing is ever the same again.
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slash, fic: the long surrender, au, belldom, muse, nanowrimo

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myz_bee November 12 2010, 05:50:44 UTC
i'm simply amazed by how fast you're writing this, and how fantastic a story it's developed in to. mucho love bb <333

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lalalive23 November 13 2010, 06:28:06 UTC
:D :D thank you so much bb <33 I love you!

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licklepickle November 12 2010, 06:59:43 UTC
*gulps down a few breaths*
Wow. What an incredibly hot way to end one rollercoaster of a chapter!
The way you describe Matt playing has made me have to go watch a load of acoustic Moose tracks on YouTube!! Just....because!
God. Damn.

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lalalive23 November 13 2010, 06:28:53 UTC
*squeezes* I love the idea of them coming together and they don't even know it. UNF.

Love youuu!!

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head_o_rainbows November 12 2010, 07:09:46 UTC
I really love the relationship that's developing between Matt and Julia. You make me fall for your OCs.

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lalalive23 November 13 2010, 06:29:31 UTC
I'm so glad you like her, them, everyone, this story!! <33 Thank you for reading, love!

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museisbliss November 12 2010, 12:19:31 UTC
Did I mention I'm reading when I'm supposedly working?? Well now, I am hence the long gap of silence since my overly excited comment this morning. I'm just stunned by the sheer intensity of everything that happened in this chapter. They are so obviously meant to be, and I'll personally take care of anything that may or may not get in the way =0P That includes Julia btw, but the woman sure brings an interesting twist to the whole plot. She's hard to dislike no matter how I try.
Oh I am so in love with the way you describe everything about Matt's performances and how you reminded us of what would happen if Matt and Dom were to lock eyes during that time. Those blue eyes will be the death of me! <3
I love you so much for this girl friend, you are one wicked gal!

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lalalive23 November 13 2010, 06:31:24 UTC
How naughty of you! But that's ok. I'm totally guilty of running out of class if one of my fave fics gets updated LOL

We might not have to fight Julia ;) She is all sorts of legendary *nods*

Thank you for your sweet words, love. They mean so much to me <3

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museisbliss November 13 2010, 10:19:19 UTC
I know I'm a naughty girl, but what can I say, you're just so worth it. This fic's turned out to be exactly my brand of heroin you know...
And I totally squealed when I logged on five secs ago and saw yet another update which I'm literally dying for right now.

I'm sure Julia will turn out to be way cooler than any of us could ever dream of...let's just see how's she's gonna do that.

You're very welcome sweetie, your fic means a whole lot to me so I think we're even =0) <3

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herverylowness November 12 2010, 12:52:26 UTC
Beautiful chapter! Also, keep it up with NaNoWriMo! You're doing great!

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lalalive23 November 13 2010, 06:31:53 UTC
Thank you dear!! *pulls out pompoms* You're at the home stretch. GO GO!! :D

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