The Long Surrender: 4/??

Nov 11, 2010 01:20

Title: The Long Surrender
Author: lalalive23 
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Fluff and sadness, swearing
Summary: AU. Matt moved to Spain immediately after his lover left him to continue his work on the Spanish guitar. When Dom takes a holiday with his new fiancee, his world gets turned upside down and nothing is ever the same again.
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slash, fic: the long surrender, au, belldom, muse, nanowrimo

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muser_anivita November 11 2010, 08:18:28 UTC
Another great chapter!! I’m so happy you updated so quickly :D because I love this story so much and I was dying to read more of it.
Their meeting was perfect. I love how Julia and Matt connected. And those looks between Dom and Mat…. I would love to know what Dom was thinking in that moment ;)
Julia is amazing I adore her, she is so sweet and kind, she’s like the perfect woman. I think is going to be hard for Mathew to compete against her for Dom’s love (If it comes to that; I have no idea)
Thank you so much for posting this lovely chapter.
If you need help with Spanish let me know I’ll be happy to help ;)

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lalalive23 November 12 2010, 05:35:13 UTC
You shall find out my dear!!

I'm really glad you've taken a liking to Julia. I always get nervous when I include OC's just because they're mine and I know people read for the belldom.

Next time I include Spanish, I will be passing this along to you for beta services, if you don't mind? :D

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muser_anivita November 12 2010, 18:33:45 UTC
Of course I don't mind. Like I said I'll be happy to help.
Thanks for taking time to reply to our comments . That's really sweet :)

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hopetomany November 11 2010, 10:03:10 UTC
Just read all 4 chapters in one sitting (and Prologue, LOL!). Am now hooked! It's tweaked a few complex feelings for me, because you can't help but like Julia, and you can't help but see her and Dom as such a great couple. But... BELLDOM!!

Really looking forward to more of this. Dom's confusion and the twists in his emotions are fascinating. :)

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lalalive23 November 12 2010, 05:36:37 UTC
OO! Thank you for reading them all dear! I'm so glad you like it.

Yeah, Julia and Dom are perfect for one another, but Dom and Matt are perfect together too. What does one do, in this situation :(

Thank you so much for your comment sweety!

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licklepickle November 11 2010, 10:58:17 UTC
Damn you for making me like Julia! Damn you I say!!!
We all know the stormy grey sky looks the most beautiful with the blue ocean beneath it :)

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lalalive23 November 12 2010, 05:38:00 UTC
YOU MUST LIKE JULIA. YOU MUST I SAY!

Really, though, I'm glad you like her. She's such an awesome lady.

Love you pickle!! x x

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pat401 November 11 2010, 12:47:30 UTC
Loved this chapter! I'm hooked, can't wait for more!

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lalalive23 November 12 2010, 05:38:21 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you like it! Thank you for commenting!

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head_o_rainbows November 11 2010, 13:02:20 UTC
i seriously hope you are taking this where i think you are. because Julia is amazing

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lalalive23 November 12 2010, 05:39:16 UTC
Ooo. That all depends...what are you hoping for? ;)

Thank you so much for you comment bb!

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