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[lalaith86]

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Title: Caretaker.
Author: Lalaith86 (Sila)
Rating: R for swearing.
Pairing: RVD/Sabu
Summary: Rob is sick and Sabu plays nursemaid. Sortof...
Feedback: Please, please, please!
Disclaimer: I own nothing. I could put up a case for the plot, but I’m too lazy to.
Author’s Note: Dedicated to raisingkane, for being awesome, and marvinvii, for

Comments

[marvinvii]

I never mind sharing with RK:) Thankies. You really work hard in converting me, don't ya?;) All the fucked-upness and denial and pretty pretty lurve;) Would Sabu be really pissed off if I called him 'cute'?;P

[lalaith86]

I try, I try. ;) Though if I haven't converted you by now, then I never will. *snickers*

And isn't their relationship awesomely fucked up? I love them. *snugs* Sabu'd probably kill you for calling him cute, though I call him that all the time. His silly 'I don't love him, damnit' schtick is so, so cute. XD

[lalaith86]

They make it easy. Their relationship is just that layered. :) *grins* Thanks, hun, I'm glad you liked it!

[falconwhitaker]

Damn, woman, you're fantastic! No, rly.

Ooh, ooh, I saw some Sabu action today on the telly! It was the WWECW recap of 2007 thingy. I got to see Sabu saving Rob's ass by chucking a chair at somebody's face, then get his head kicked into a table. Good times, good times...

[lalaith86]

*blush* You're a sweetheart.

I'm still uploading this for you, but the internet dying makes it difficult. XD And good times indeed, haha. 'Sabu nearly killing himself?' Ah, good times, good times. *snickers*

[falconwhitaker]

Yep. Sabu nearly killing himself is always fun to watch. ;D

[lalaith86]

The man has such awesome fans. They don't cheer unless he semi-kills himself. XD *pets him* Awww.

[phoenixastraea]

Lovely job, as always hon!

Now some favorite moments:

Peace and quiet became empty and alone way too easily.

I love that. It's so true, and somehow, it embodies the setting perfectly as well as their relationship. The feeling of just not wanting to be alone after a while.

I also like Sabu's feelings of helplessness in the face of Rob still being kind to him. Great great characterization there. It feels very real to me.

One slight nitpick: there's a moment where you said that Rob's face was lit by the thunder outside. I think you mean lightning or storm, since thunder doesn't necessarily light up. =^)

Either way, I loved reading it. Gonna write a follow up to it?

[lalaith86]

Aww, thank you!

I can imagine that wrestlers can get terribly lonely. Always moving, around people but never really able to form strong relationships, it sounds so dreary to me at times. They see each other at the worst of times.

Heh, I think Sabu feels helpless and confused at that. It's so unlike him, and something he's not used to. I think he'd really have a problem with dealing with it.

Ah, yes, I meant to say thunderstorm (the storm itself is a combination of thunder and lightning, right, so that would work?). That's just me being stupid. XD

I'm so glad you liked it! I'm always happy to see you comment, because you have a feel for them like I do, so I really appreciate your comment. ^^ And I might write a follow up. I don't know, perhaps if I have a plotbunny for it. ^^

Have you been able to write anything lately?