There are no words to describe my elation at you writing this pairing (and fic for that matter) :D Really - you rock.
And I don't think you have anything to worry about, even considering it's length I still think it read very well. There's something about Susumu that you caught there that fits. Very spiffy :)
Thank you ^^ I had been rewatching episodes 19-20 when I decided to join 30_Kisses (Because SusTetsu needs more love, damnit), and I love Saya, really, but I love Susumu more XD
Wow. I didn't think I would actually see a PMK fic with this pairing. They seriously need more fic. You captured the feel of Susumu perfectly. ^_^ Especially the part with the roof scene--which was my favorite part in the series.
Your story reads and flows nicely so don't worry about it. The first sentence seems just a tad too long though and you have a few weird comma placements but it's neglible. XD I'll be looking forward to your next themes. ^_^
Too bad no one else has written fic for this pairing, eh? I love this pairing tooooo... but I really can't write. And my drawings will never do them justice.
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And I don't think you have anything to worry about, even considering it's length I still think it read very well. There's something about Susumu that you caught there that fits. Very spiffy :)
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Your story reads and flows nicely so don't worry about it. The first sentence seems just a tad too long though and you have a few weird comma placements but it's neglible. XD I'll be looking forward to your next themes. ^_^
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Haha... yeah. My English teacher has been on my back about my long sentences for a while now ^^;;
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*was randomly browsing 30_kisses memories* >_> Wtf, I love this pairing <3
Pretty fic. X3 Yeay, unusual secondperson~~~
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Too bad no one else has written fic for this pairing, eh? I love this pairing tooooo... but I really can't write. And my drawings will never do them justice.
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IT IS TOO BAD. D: HOWEVER: PSH. D: LIES! <3 PLEASE TO ...SOMETHING. 8D;; <3 Hm...
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