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xfragments March 20 2015, 03:32:13 UTC
omggg this was gorgeous <3

Jaebum has always been Jinyoung’s light, his flame of hope.
Jinyoung has always been Jaebum’s air.
cries so accurate. you captured their entire relationship and personalities so well. they really are such opposites but they balance each other out so well.

“I’m sorry.”
“I love you.”

I SCREAMED AT THAT PART because idk how you meant to write this but i took it as one of them said i'm sorry while the other said i love you? and im like omggg. or is it they both say im sorry then they both say i love you?

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lahdeedah000 March 20 2015, 11:48:51 UTC
SCREAMS AND FANGIRLS A LITTLE (cough a lot cough) BECAUSE OMG I LOVE YOUR FICS gahhh omg thank you so much for your lovely comment, it means a lot >.<

Hehe the end....that was left vague on purpose. Please interpret as you will ^^

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hipployta March 20 2015, 05:41:02 UTC
JJP...balancing each other and also able to lash out since they know each other so well...and their ending words...aww

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lahdeedah000 March 20 2015, 11:49:54 UTC
Thank you~ <3

And just thanks in general, I suck at replying to comments but you're always here on every one of my got7 fics, thank you so much you always make me smile <3

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noisestorms March 20 2015, 16:37:52 UTC
i feel like this captures their dynamic tbh and your writing flows smoothly and it's a pleasure to read

at the end, when jinyoung goes to him, that is so jinyoung bc they may both be stubborn but jaebum is always just a //tad// more. (jaebum better take care of poor sick jinyoung tbh)

this was rly good thank you for writing it!!!!

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lahdeedah000 March 21 2015, 01:30:36 UTC
And thank you so much for your lovely comment!!!

And yes, basically afterwards they cuddle and Jaebum babies Jinyoung to the point that it's nearly absurd because he feels guilty for how he acted when Jinyoung was sick. The maknaes shall find them curled up together on Jinyoung's bed in the morning and take incriminating photos to use as blackmail. XD

/whispers also fangirling here because I see you around a lot and tbh i'm a wimp and struggle to read smut but your fic Please Tell Me I Am Not Undone killed me/

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[Drabble] burnt tinder and glowing ashes (we're rekindling our love) livejournal March 21 2015, 00:27:18 UTC
User amelioratedays referenced to your post from [Drabble] burnt tinder and glowing ashes (we're rekindling our love) saying: [...] m reckons he's a blue flame and Jinyoung is oxygen. A/N: Remix of 's fic "Rekindle [...]

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burnt tinder and glowing ashes (we're rekindling our love) livejournal March 21 2015, 00:35:04 UTC
User amelioratedays referenced to your post from burnt tinder and glowing ashes (we're rekindling our love) saying: [...] m reckons he's a blue flame and Jinyoung is oxygen. A/N: Remix of 's fic "rekindle [...]

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