Bittersweet [1/?]
Title : Bittersweet
Pairing : Uchipi - Ryotego
Summary : Uchi Hiroki, a young man who has to survive living in Tokyo city and has to support three of his younger siblings, has never thought that at his current working place he’ll meet a little boy -who will lead him to a person that will turn his world upside down-.
A/N : MINNA~ I'M BACK WITH A ( Read more... )
Pairing : Uchipi - Ryotego
Summary : Uchi Hiroki, a young man who has to survive living in Tokyo city and has to support three of his younger siblings, has never thought that at his current working place he’ll meet a little boy -who will lead him to a person that will turn his world upside down-.
A/N : MINNA~ I'M BACK WITH A ( Read more... )
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I'm excited ^-^ I like the idea to write from different POV's! Whee ~
Uwaah, this idea is so new! I never read sth like that before ~ it's great ^-^
I like Uchi's POV! It's interesting to read. And the chidren are interesting, too ~
I love Chinen ♥ And Pi is his brother eh .. I wonder how this all turns out ^-^ Uchi is sure a great brother!
Am curious for your next update! -hugs- ♥
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yes it's new~
and there's a lot of children here ahaahaha...
yup pi is actually his brother (not his papa >.<)
uchi is a good brother.. working so hard for the family^^
thankyou for reading it, eyleen-chan ^__^
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Kota is a little bit of a trouble maker too.
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it's uchipi again ^__^ and there's chinen here and other hsj members as the children^^
kota is surely needs some discipline~
heehe,
thankyou for reading it^^
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I'm glad to know that there's hsj members, too.
Great idea of making ryutaro and yuto become uchi's brothers. But poor uchi.. He seems like he always being the poor boy.. But it's okay as long as the ending will be 'happily ever after' hehe..
I'm waiting for the next chap!! Ga sabar nih.. Moga cepet rampung ya chap slanjutnya, hehe
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*hugs back*
i thought ryuu can definitely be uchi's brother^^
uchi is poor, but he works hard for his family~
so that his brothers will be happy.
heehe,
thankyou for reading it^^
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chinen..tego..you put them togather in one fanfic.you make my dreams come truee!!
and,and papa Pi?? XDDDD
poor uchi..
yuto n yabu are such a baddass
fortunately there is ryuu
can't wait for tego's chappie ^^
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i hope you will like the story~
ahahaha pi is his brother but i'll tell you in the next chapter why he calls pi 'papa'^^
thankyou for reading it ^__^
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new fic already?
hehee..ureshi ^^
it's so cute~
pikachu is very kawaii..and the way chinen smiling is kill me XP
ah~ i thought pi is chii's dad for real XD
i'm waiting for the next chapter ^^ ganbatte!!
*sorry for my bad english*
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yes it's a new one~
uchi and chinen look cute together ne? heehe...
yup pi is his brother, i'll explain why he calls pi 'papa' later^^
thankyou for reading it~
*it's okaiii... english is not my first language too.. and i made so many errors in my writing, gomen ne^^*
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yup, you must explain, so you must update soon ^^
*hehee..gapapa*
*oia,saia dari indonesia juga lho, tepatnya dari jogja ^^*
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how can i call u?^__^
heehe, iya maybe i'm going to post next chapter tonight^^
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