Jump the Track: Chapter 9

May 11, 2011 18:09

Title - Jump the Track
Chapter - 9/?
Author - lafleurdumal85  
Rating - NC-17
Summary - High school AU. It's Dean's senior year at Lawrence High, and he's already given up on himself. It takes the arrival of the strange, intense, awkward Castiel Delacroix at the school to prove to Dean that maybe his life is worth saving after all.
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dean/castiel, au, title: jump the track, rating: nc-17

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mulder200 May 11 2011, 19:35:06 UTC
Dean frowned. “Sammy, are you... has this girl made her your bitch?”

“No!”

“Because we talked about that.”

LOL!

Yeah, I can't see this ending well.

But then he realized that Castiel was so fucking strong, and he had Dean pinned up against this wall, and Dean was trapped, and he didn’t think he’d be able to stop Cas, and he couldn’t get out and... and he remembered the last time someone had overpowered him like this and he kind of felt like he was going to throw up, and he couldn’t let it happen again but now it was happening again and Dean felt like he was suffocating.

Oh Poor Dean!

And I think you handled the issue of Dean's rape quite well.

And I love Castiel's reasoning and his unconditional love of Dean. It's just what he needed.

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lafleurdumal85 May 13 2011, 23:02:58 UTC
XD I'm really having fun with the Sam sub-plot!

I'm glad you think I handled it okay, it wasn't an easy chapter to write!

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javoss18 May 11 2011, 20:14:11 UTC
T_T poor dean, broke my heart all that had to happen, but thank God that CAS is with him, and most importantly the understanding that Dean was not your fault and not have to be embarrassed ...
I am simply without words, this fic is wonderful and very beautiful.

I wait impatiently for the next chapter.

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lafleurdumal85 May 13 2011, 23:04:08 UTC
Thank you so much! It was a really difficult chapter to write, and I'm so glad that people think it works.

The next chapter is going to be much happier :)

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theradicalrad May 11 2011, 22:44:57 UTC
;__;

Please except this paltry emoticon because my words just aren't quite capturing all the sadness felt during this chapter. <3

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lafleurdumal85 May 13 2011, 23:06:39 UTC
Oh, I'm sorry I made you sad! I cried writing it, to be honest. It wasn't easy. The next chapter is going to be much happier :)

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lafleurdumal85 May 13 2011, 23:11:00 UTC
Thank you so much ^__^ I was really worried about it!

I'm really glad you're enjoying the fic :D I'm writing chapter 10 right now, and I'll get it up asap. There's much less angst in that one!

I love that story too. I think I saw it somewhere on Tumblr, and it stayed with me.

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lafleurdumal85 May 13 2011, 23:13:11 UTC
Thank you so much! I was really worried about making it in any way gratuitous or insensitive. I'm so relieved people think I managed it okay.

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