Jump the Track: Chapter 6

Apr 03, 2011 18:18

Title - Jump the Track
Chapter - 6/?
Author - lafleurdumal85 
Rating - NC-17
Summary - High school AU. It's Dean's senior year at Lawrence High, and he's already given up on himself. It takes the arrival of the strange, intense, awkward Castiel Delacroix at the school to prove to Dean that maybe his life is worth saving after all.
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au, title: jump the track, rating: nc-17

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history13041985 April 3 2011, 19:31:59 UTC
I love your story ! I love how you write Dean and how he changes ! I can understand how he acts .

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lafleurdumal85 April 11 2011, 15:40:19 UTC
Thank you so much! I can act a bit like Dean on occasion, as much as I wish I didn't, so I find that part of him quite easy to relate to.

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functionalduck April 3 2011, 21:39:58 UTC
I adore your version of Pam, and all of this is just so good. Religion is a hard subject to handle delicately but I think you're managing really well.

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lafleurdumal85 April 11 2011, 15:42:46 UTC
Thank you - I miss Pam!

I'm glad you think I'm handling the religious aspect well. I was a bit worried about that! I think it helps that I don't have extreme views either way.

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mulder200 April 3 2011, 23:04:37 UTC
“Okay, family, listen up,” he announced over breakfast on the first Saturday of the month. “We all know what day it is: Christmas Tree Day. Now, at eleven-hundred hours, we’re going to go pick out the perfect tree. At thirteen-hundred hours we’ll bring it home and get it in the house. We’ll have a lunch break after that, and Mary? How about some of your special Christmas cookies? That way the house will smell like pine and gingerbread. At seventeen-hundred hours we’ll all gather in the front room to decorate the tree. Then after dinner, Dean and I will go out to put up the outside lights on the house. I bought some new ones, so if that damn Mr Costello across the street thinks he’s going to outdo me this year, he’s got another thing coming. You know, I never thought I’d enjoy having a Christmas nemesis, but I do. Oh, I do.” He laughed, a little darkly.

Dean wondered whether anyone else’s parents considered preparing for the holidays as a military operation.

LOL!

Dean hid a smile; Castiel was a total maiden aunt sometimes. “Lots and ( ... )

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lafleurdumal85 April 11 2011, 15:45:33 UTC
I had so much fun with John in this chapter! Dean is still being completely oblivious and frustrating (I'm writing this, and I get frustrated with him!), but some things are going to get resolved in the next chapter :)

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siennis April 4 2011, 00:07:05 UTC
This was so warm and fuzzy even though Dean is such an idiot lol

♥♥

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lafleurdumal85 April 11 2011, 15:46:11 UTC
Thank you, I'm so glad you like it! Yes, Dean is definitely being an idiot. BUT a few things are getting resolved next chapter :)

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lafleurdumal85 April 11 2011, 15:47:17 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm loving writing this.

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