[Complete] Locked Up In This Prison We Call Love

[lafeelivresque]

The first time Patrick visits him, Pete doesn't recognise him. The shock of being locked away in this place so suddenly, with next to no warning and absolutely no justification has messed with his mind considerably. It's mind-numbingly monotonous and soul-crushingly hollow in here. Nothing but blank walls, shuffling, identical guards and the

Comments

[ocelot_daemon]

Wow, this is gorgeous. The only nitpick I could say is that you used their for there somewhere at the beginning, so considering that's the only flaw in this baby, it's just... wow. So wow.

[lafeelivresque]

Ah shit, that's annoying. I shall fix, thanks for pointing it out.
And glad you liked it. It was literally keeping me up nights...

[fobxfaerie]

wow- I wasn't expecting that ending!
I love it!

[lafeelivresque]

Thanks, that's awesome to know. I was afraid it'd either be too vague and non-sensical or otherwise I'd go too far the other way and make it too obvious from the outset. But if it genuinely took you by surprise that's awesome, thanks for that =0)

[kittygrenade]

I love everything about this story.
It's simply amazing.

~mmrs~

[lafeelivresque]

mini-squee =0)
Thank you, glad you liked it!

[likethepaint]

Oh. This is wonderful. Just, oh.

The empty coridors, and him being the only one and not recognising Patrick. Then how he remembers him, and he's all friend(!) and then this line -
Patrick laughs softly, musically, like everything about him
- just wonderful, wonderful.

and then the ending and everything and yes. absolute <3 xinfinity.

[lafeelivresque]

Oh, thanks! Really glad you liked this, and you've totally got some of my favourite elements of this picked out too!
Thanks for reading =0)

[vinylsigns]

Guh, I read the lyrics at the end and it just made sense. *head esplode* Jesus, I feel like you've just gone all WWE on my ass and taken a metal chair to the back of my head. DAMN. You so win ♥♥♥

[lafeelivresque]

Haha, sorry, physical pain wasn't an intended by-product of this thing, it was meant to be cathartic!
Really glad you felt it though, thanks for the compliment. Pay me back by posting something new and awesome?

[vinylsigns]

lol, the pain I don't mind, it's handling the ice packs without freezing my hand off ;)

I have been writing a post-Download 2007 fic but the combination of writer's block and recent, extremely shitty events in my life are slowing the process :( In any case, I'll have it done in the next couple of days, most likely.

[lafeelivresque]

Post-Download fic! It's yet to surface from anyone, and I'm frankly a little surprised. Can't wait to read yours, hope it's coming along a little better for you =0)